Catharsis: My First Love

I heard your voice first
while you were sitting behind me
on the second row in grade nine class
The moment I saw you first, 
I felt a volcano booming, inside me

I heard you criticize my school,
comparing it with your previous one 
and to escape from your grunt 
I locked my earlobes.  
I told your sister I love my Mom, my School ......

Next day, I saw you alone,
alone – at my Grand Mom’s house 
I saw you hide like a mouse……….
a frightened mouse, in a dirty rat hole …. 

I still remember what happened 
I was in grade nine 
We stood with daggers in arms, 
and you splattered my white-washed 
school walls with a mud-fire

We hated each other as crow and cuckoo do
or cobra and mongoose do,
but our mates stared with mouths agape 
at the rising … scarlet castle of love…
in our fiercely fighting battle ground

I dreamed one day a nightmare:
My prince fell dead in the battle front……
I could do nothing………
I dreamed of marrying my first love,
but it remains a living, breathing dream.…


Dec. 5, 2020
Catharsis Poetry Poetry Contest
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Koplin Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 6:27 AM
Congratulations on your win Rashini!!
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December 12, 2020 at 8:47 PM
Thank you so much Mark!!!!
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December 11, 2020 at 4:57 AM
I'm back to congratulate you on your placement, Rashini!!
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December 12, 2020 at 12:59 AM
Thank you so much again!!!
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December 11, 2020 at 3:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Rashini :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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December 12, 2020 at 12:59 AM
Thank you so much Sunshine Smile!!!
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December 10, 2020 at 8:15 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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December 10, 2020 at 8:30 PM
Thank you so much Loving Kindness!!!
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December 10, 2020 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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December 10, 2020 at 8:29 PM
Thank you so much Silent one!!!
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December 5, 2020 at 8:48 AM
I truly love this excellent piece, Rashini!! I like how appropriately you coin your title, introduce your conflict (with a vivid setting), develop your conflict (with a twist on the penultimate verse/stanza) and the tragic resolution!! It’s a great write, indeed!!
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December 5, 2020 at 11:59 PM
Thank you so much and This means lot to me!!
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