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Catharsis: My First Love

I heard your voice first while you were sitting behind me on the second row in grade nine class The moment I saw you first, I felt a volcano booming, inside me I heard you criticize my school, comparing it with your previous one and to escape from your grunt I locked my earlobes. I told your sister I love my Mom, my School ...... Next day, I saw you alone, alone – at my Grand Mom’s house I saw you hide like a mouse………. a frightened mouse, in a dirty rat hole …. I still remember what happened I was in grade nine We stood with daggers in arms, and you splattered my white-washed school walls with a mud-fire We hated each other as crow and cuckoo do or cobra and mongoose do, but our mates stared with mouths agape at the rising … scarlet castle of love… in our fiercely fighting battle ground I dreamed one day a nightmare: My prince fell dead in the battle front…… I could do nothing……… I dreamed of marrying my first love, but it remains a living, breathing dream.… Dec. 5, 2020 Catharsis Poetry Poetry Contest Contest sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 12/12/2020 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Rashini!!
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Rashini Kaushalya
Date: 12/12/2020 8:47:00 PM
Thank you so much Mark!!!!
Date: 12/11/2020 4:57:00 AM
I'm back to congratulate you on your placement, Rashini!!
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Rashini Kaushalya
Date: 12/12/2020 12:59:00 AM
Thank you so much again!!!
Date: 12/11/2020 3:00:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Rashini :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Rashini Kaushalya
Date: 12/12/2020 12:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Sunshine Smile!!!
Date: 12/10/2020 8:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Rashini Kaushalya
Date: 12/10/2020 8:30:00 PM
Thank you so much Loving Kindness!!!
Date: 12/10/2020 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Rashini Kaushalya
Date: 12/10/2020 8:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Silent one!!!
Date: 12/5/2020 8:48:00 AM
I truly love this excellent piece, Rashini!! I like how appropriately you coin your title, introduce your conflict (with a vivid setting), develop your conflict (with a twist on the penultimate verse/stanza) and the tragic resolution!! It’s a great write, indeed!!
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Rashini Kaushalya
Date: 12/5/2020 11:59:00 PM
Thank you so much and This means lot to me!!

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