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'catching Words'

Missing words that drop from the quiet sky..
Some you just can't catch and let pass by..
Others are like tasting raindrops in the night..
Or trying to kiss a snowflake before its out of sight..
Clearer days and clearer minds let more land straight..
Now its easier to feel the thoughts from love not hate..

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Sarah Comstock

Date: 2/17/2011 2:55:00 PM

I love it!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2011 9:51:00 AM

Wow u captured my tongue and mind with this one... now how do u do it... from... a sad emotion.. u brought me to a wow... emotion... thanks... by the way did u know love and hate are not opposite ... they are the same emotions to feel.. just different concepts.. love the thought... alwAys p.d.

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/11/2011 10:08:00 PM

It is easier to embrace it too ;-) love this one MJF luv Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/11/2011 12:19:00 PM

Simply beautiful visuals in your lines penned so lovely Michael my W.K.... an intense in depth insight into catching words to convey messages to everyone... enjoyed this most entertaining write from the White Knight .. your Jersey Girl forever and always with luv..

Allen Hackett

Date: 2/10/2011 8:03:00 PM

Never tried kissing a snowflake before. Sounds petty cool. I enjoyed your poem

Karis Watie

Date: 2/10/2011 7:20:00 PM

Beautiful in so many words.

Dana Smith

Date: 2/10/2011 2:16:00 PM

ohh this is beautiful

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/10/2011 11:45:00 AM

My goodness Michael, This is so profound! Well done, I love it. As Always, Shar

Elizabeth Bark

Date: 2/10/2011 7:53:00 AM

soup mail my friend=)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/10/2011 6:49:00 AM

Got that one right..Only sometimes hate and hurtful words linger in a bad way..Excellent work..Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and leaving a kind review of my work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/9/2011 11:17:00 PM

Hi Michael :) Really enjoyed how you "catch words" here-- what can I say but I certainly can relate to this? Isn't it just amazing how these words just come, how lucky we are to catch them :) btw I am so sorry for missing that window contest of yours-- hopefully I get to enter your next one :) I hope you are well :) thank you for your inspiring comments--enjoy the rest of your week :) smiles for you :)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/9/2011 9:39:00 PM

Superb Micheal. Never thought about words in this way. Thanks for sharing. A delight.

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/9/2011 9:12:00 PM

This is such a delight to read, Michael, I have no choice but to add it to my Favs. List! It is really lovely! I love the last line especially! Thanks for the always kind comments. Love, Annalise

Constance La France

Date: 2/9/2011 6:17:00 PM

I loved every single line of this awesome poem, well done~~

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/9/2011 5:52:00 PM

It is if you are holding a butterfly net, and are catching only the most beautiful words that come from the sky! Loving this!! ~ love, Carrie

Christopher Marcum

Date: 2/9/2011 4:48:00 PM

smile -- i love this beautiful sweet reflection, "My Dear 'Blessed & Gifted Friend,' Michael J. Falatico.'" ~ you have such a softened Soul, which whispers so beautifully sometimes and this pituresque painting brushed amid a touch in sublime, is a keeper for the charts of, pristine faves; "Lovely, 'My Dear Friend.'" ~ love, christopher ~