Catching Rays - a Duorhyme

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Catching Rays – a Duo Rhyme


If you’re lying naked on your chaise
in your backyard catching rays
be careful others may intrude
calling your behavior lewd
a towel cover you should include
in case your accidently viewed
certain parts must not protrude
when you sunbathe In the nude
your actions might be misconstrued
and cause the neighborhood to  feud
but go for it on sunny days
if your in a tanning craze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/10/2012 1:51:00 PM
Great idea for the contest very creative..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/9/2012 10:50:00 AM
A well deserved placement for you in the Duo-Rhyme contest. Congratulations Liz. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2012 12:31:00 PM
Haha, Liz! I love this write even though my tanning in the nude days have far passed me by... congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/4/2012 2:30:00 AM
Liz, congrats on your win, ha love this...David
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Date: 8/4/2012 1:24:00 AM
Liz, I couldn't help smiling all the way through this one. Congratulations on your HM. I truly enjoyed it.
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Date: 8/3/2012 7:15:00 PM
Hi, Liz. Congrats on the HM in my contest. I quite enjoyed this one about tanning naked. I have even written some poems myself on tanning naked! I enjoy seeing punctuation in poems. And you made a small mistake in the final line. If not for that, this would easily have gotten a higher place. Your rhyme and rhythm were great!
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Date: 7/19/2012 2:12:00 AM
well written! it was a great read :D
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