Ghairo Daniels Poet Crystalline

catching cocoa creams

  
Placed : 4th : Standard Contest : Tania Kitchin
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Venus  dropping  chandelier dreams 

        Jupiter glides catching cocoa creams ~
 

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Krishnanand Guptar September 22, 2025 at 9:30 AM Congratulations , friend, on your win in this contest with an excellent metaphorical romantic write, that carries one to the sky. Wishing you a delightful day. Ghairo Daniels September 22, 2025 at 3:21 PM Ditto, Sir. B blessed, always.

Maclawrence Famuyiwa September 21, 2025 at 8:34 PM You took my eyes on a momentary spatial voyage into the venus and jupiter and creamed my chandelier in an alliterative dream. Well done. Ghairo Daniels September 21, 2025 at 8:59 PM Hahahaha ! Have a good week, MF.

Tania Kitchin September 21, 2025 at 4:01 PM Ghairo, congratulations on your winning placement with your charming poem. Ghairo Daniels September 21, 2025 at 6:11 PM Thankyou for sponsorship, charming Tania. xx.

Randy Freie September 20, 2025 at 4:48 PM Oops! I shouldn't have done that! I just put on twenty pounds after reading your super sweet crystalline cream dream. Thanks for the extra pudding around my eyes! Ghairo Daniels September 20, 2025 at 9:03 PM ThkU 4 visiting, Randy. Yeah ! when we go outa, there’ll be cocoa creams. Blessings, Sir.

Paige Hind September 18, 2025 at 12:36 PM Gorgeous image, sweetheart!! Thanks for your kind words on my poetry- I am just getting to commenting. YOU are quite the genius, yourself. Ghairo Daniels September 20, 2025 at 9:00 PM Xxxxxxx.

Joseph P. DiMino September 16, 2025 at 3:25 AM Yep, a healthy break from health food. Even planet giants need to come down to earth once in awhile. Have some fun. Well done, Ghairo. Ghairo Daniels September 16, 2025 at 3:53 AM Haha ! Agreed. ThkU, Joe.

Krishika Upadhyay September 15, 2025 at 8:18 PM This is whimsical and imaginative. The cosmic imagery paired with sweet delight creates a playful, dreamlike scene. Thank you for sharing this with us. Ghairo Daniels September 15, 2025 at 11:24 PM ThkU 4 lovely comment, Krishika. Yes, Jupiter needs to play. He is so serious. Xx.