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Catch You

I want to catch you like the flu and never take the shot you'll forever be in my system because forever is all I've got to give you I would hate to become immune to you it's seems weird to me to not desperately crave you you give me energy We vibe off each other like rain on a solid umbrella and I wish you could read my mind than you'd forever hear me singing your name in A cappella I taste you repeatedly like raw meat and hope your love continues to spread through me like salmonella now enough with the infections I just feel right when were together.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/4/2009 10:50:00 AM
A amazing poem. Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/2/2009 10:29:00 PM
Shahana, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:45:00 PM
Hi Shahana! Congratulations on being in the round-one finals! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2009 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Shahana. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2009 4:58:00 AM
Lovely poems. I really like it. Nice work.
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Date: 7/11/2009 2:30:00 PM
Hey, thy theme, thrust and tone teaches... You are such a wonderful poet. Please keep writing and congratulations on your awesome piece being featured this week. You are great Shahana! Adeleke
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Date: 7/9/2009 11:37:00 PM
Shahana, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/8/2009 10:14:00 AM
Interesting thoughts. Sara
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Date: 7/6/2009 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem>>James
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Date: 7/6/2009 7:01:00 AM
Such a heartfelt write. Congratulations on your featured poem this week Shahana. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2009 10:39:00 PM
Very nice poem, congratulations on your featured write. Post some more. Ernilando
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