Catch the Wind

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In the wayward breeze 
I need walk the golden sands
Of Gran Alacant,
dwell awhile inside your breath
to feel you all around me.

© Harry J Horsman 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/7/2013 2:37:00 PM
Awesome,,, I hear the Song " The Wayward Wind" Patsy Cline, I was a yr old in 1956 ;}
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Date: 8/29/2013 5:46:00 PM
I so love this harry ;} ,,,,, dwell awhile inside your breath to feel you all around me. AWESOME line ;}
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Date: 8/26/2013 3:03:00 PM
Splendid!!! Terry
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Date: 8/20/2013 9:16:00 AM
so nice. I can feel it. warm thoughts, Ralph
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Date: 8/19/2013 9:49:00 AM
awesome tanka poem friend Harry...Gran Alacant...hmmm need to look in a dictionary :). Thanks for sharing and for your nice comment on my poem. Have a great day!! hugs, Maria
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Date: 8/18/2013 7:54:00 PM
breathtaking!!!
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Date: 8/17/2013 10:45:00 AM
Good morning Harry, dropped by to see if you have posted any new poems and to say hello.
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Date: 8/16/2013 11:31:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by Harry! "Cathch The Wind"... superb, sensual Tanka!
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Date: 8/15/2013 8:19:00 AM
"Wayward breeze".. "Golden Sands"...." Dwell awhile inside your breathe"-- such a wonderful flow of words. "Gran Alacant"-- not too sure if that is a place or person, being from a foreign land... as in not living in the USA, I wouldn't know.
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Date: 8/15/2013 4:54:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 8/15/2013 12:24:00 AM
so fabulous.... enjoyed so very much deary bro Harry... and thank you so much for stopping and encouragement :) Sk
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Date: 8/14/2013 11:59:00 AM
beautiful tanka Harry....best wishes
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Date: 8/14/2013 11:55:00 AM
Inner beautiful website you have used for communication of both sweet hearts. Loved your style, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/14/2013 11:31:00 AM
I like this very much. Dwell a while inside your breath to feel you all around me. That is awesome. Thanks for sharing and for reading ( My Sisters }. Now you know more about me. Lucilla
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Date: 8/14/2013 5:39:00 AM
This is stunning Harry, lovely write indeed. Hope you are doing good :) tc Wilma
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Date: 8/13/2013 10:34:00 PM
wow, this one is amazing, harry. Sometimes your romantic side just takes over in these shorter forms. Thanks for putting up a new poem!!
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Date: 8/13/2013 8:02:00 PM
Inside your breath... beautiful poetry, Harry!!
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Date: 8/13/2013 1:59:00 PM
Very very beautiful...a peaceful place...love it Harry
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Date: 8/13/2013 10:21:00 AM
goosebumps, harry... very expressive write in its brevity....the last line stands out for me ; terrrific!..:) huggs
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Date: 8/12/2013 8:36:00 PM
Harry, i am feeling your imagery ...lovely ... and pleasing when one wants to ride the wind love style... always~ LINDA
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Date: 8/12/2013 4:10:00 PM
hi Harry captured well a walk on the shore. good pen Shadow x smiles
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Date: 8/12/2013 10:25:00 AM
Harry.....I read this earlier, but was in such a bad place I couldn't find words to post! Beautiful, Harry...simply beautiful...The last two lines are just heavenly.... :)
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Date: 8/12/2013 10:15:00 AM
This was excellent! Embracing the winds of change & memories within.
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Date: 8/12/2013 9:55:00 AM
I'll catch it for you harry, beautiful. xx
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Date: 8/12/2013 9:34:00 AM
"dwell awhile inside your breath" Nice line it synchronizes well with the poems title.
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