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I

Catch the Wind

In the wayward breeze 
I need walk the golden sands
Of Gran Alacant,
dwell awhile inside your breath
to feel you all around me.

© Harry J Horsman 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Duncan Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 2:37 PM
Awesome,,, I hear the Song " The Wayward Wind" Patsy Cline, I was a yr old in 1956 ;}
Duncan Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 5:46 PM
I so love this harry ;} ,,,,, dwell awhile inside your breath to feel you all around me. AWESOME line ;}
O'Leary Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 3:03 PM
Splendid!!! Terry
Mason Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 9:16 AM
so nice. I can feel it. warm thoughts, Ralph
Liwayway Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 9:49 AM
awesome tanka poem friend Harry...Gran Alacant...hmmm need to look in a dictionary :). Thanks for sharing and for your nice comment on my poem. Have a great day!! hugs, Maria
Ashrafi Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 7:54 PM
breathtaking!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 10:45 AM
Good morning Harry, dropped by to see if you have posted any new poems and to say hello.
Ellison Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 11:31 AM
Thanks for dropping by Harry! "Cathch The Wind"... superb, sensual Tanka!
Van Breda Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 8:19 AM
"Wayward breeze".. "Golden Sands"...." Dwell awhile inside your breathe"-- such a wonderful flow of words. "Gran Alacant"-- not too sure if that is a place or person, being from a foreign land... as in not living in the USA, I wouldn't know.
Sathasivam Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 4:54 AM
Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed. Tfs
Komala Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 12:24 AM
so fabulous.... enjoyed so very much deary bro Harry... and thank you so much for stopping and encouragement :) Sk
May Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 11:59 AM
beautiful tanka Harry....best wishes
Devnath  Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 11:55 AM
Inner beautiful website you have used for communication of both sweet hearts. Loved your style, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl
Carrillo Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 11:31 AM
I like this very much. Dwell a while inside your breath to feel you all around me. That is awesome. Thanks for sharing and for reading ( My Sisters }. Now you know more about me. Lucilla
Neels Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 5:39 AM
This is stunning Harry, lovely write indeed. Hope you are doing good :) tc Wilma
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 10:34 PM
wow, this one is amazing, harry. Sometimes your romantic side just takes over in these shorter forms. Thanks for putting up a new poem!!
Nair Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 8:02 PM
Inside your breath... beautiful poetry, Harry!!
Jones Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 1:59 PM
Very very beautiful...a peaceful place...love it Harry
Onclaud Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 10:21 AM
goosebumps, harry... very expressive write in its brevity....the last line stands out for me ; terrrific!..:) huggs
A   Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 8:36 PM
Harry, i am feeling your imagery ...lovely ... and pleasing when one wants to ride the wind love style... always~ LINDA
Hamilton Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 4:10 PM
hi Harry captured well a walk on the shore. good pen Shadow x smiles
Manassian Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 10:25 AM
Harry.....I read this earlier, but was in such a bad place I couldn't find words to post! Beautiful, Harry...simply beautiful...The last two lines are just heavenly.... :)
Tacito Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 10:15 AM
This was excellent! Embracing the winds of change & memories within.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 9:55 AM
I'll catch it for you harry, beautiful. xx
Phillips Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 9:34 AM
"dwell awhile inside your breath" Nice line it synchronizes well with the poems title.
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