Cat In Rat Hole

In the old house there once lived a fat cat
From half a mile she could smell a wet rat
She was too lazy to run
Spent her time under the sun
Lying on worn out black and white old mat.

One day when she did not find her food bowl
She was sure it was the sly rat that stole
Her stomach started to burn
She saw the rat on the run
Chased it blind, her head got stuck in the hole.

August 11, 2018
Syllable count : 10-10-7-7-10
(Checked on howmanysyllables.com)
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Gentry Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 3:13 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Delightful!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 1:03 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Roper Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 10:50 PM
Magnificent write, Subimal, this is so funny ... Congratulations on you great win! Hugs Eve
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 1:03 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Kendrick Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 6:15 PM
Interesting work. Congrats on your winning work. Sara
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 12:38 PM
Congratulations on your cute Limerick winning First Place Subimal! I just can't write in this form. You make it seem easy! xxoo : )
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 1:03 AM
Thank you, Connie. It's not easy for me as well.
Gauthier Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 9:47 AM
Congrats on your win, Subimal. A fun form for this contest.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 1:02 AM
Thank you, Line.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 6:02 AM
I think there is a message here, like an Aesop fable.
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August 14, 2018 at 1:02 AM
Thank you, Kim.
Allison Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 5:59 AM
what fun limericks Subimal, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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August 14, 2018 at 1:01 AM
Thank you, Jan.
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 4:28 AM
Very fun limerick, congratulations on your first place win!
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August 14, 2018 at 1:01 AM
Thank you, Tania for your visit.
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