Cat In Rat Hole

In the old house there once lived a fat cat
From half a mile she could smell a wet rat
She was too lazy to run
Spent her time under the sun
Lying on worn out black and white old mat.

One day when she did not find her food bowl
She was sure it was the sly rat that stole
Her stomach started to burn
She saw the rat on the run
Chased it blind, her head got stuck in the hole.

August 11, 2018
Syllable count : 10-10-7-7-10
(Checked on howmanysyllables.com)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 8/13/2018 3:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Delightful!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/14/2018 1:03:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 8/12/2018 10:50:00 PM
Magnificent write, Subimal, this is so funny ... Congratulations on you great win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/14/2018 1:03:00 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 8/12/2018 6:15:00 PM
Interesting work. Congrats on your winning work. Sara
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Date: 8/12/2018 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your cute Limerick winning First Place Subimal! I just can't write in this form. You make it seem easy! xxoo : )
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/14/2018 1:03:00 AM
Thank you, Connie. It's not easy for me as well.
Date: 8/12/2018 9:47:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Subimal. A fun form for this contest.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/14/2018 1:02:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 8/12/2018 6:02:00 AM
I think there is a message here, like an Aesop fable.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/14/2018 1:02:00 AM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 8/12/2018 5:59:00 AM
what fun limericks Subimal, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/14/2018 1:01:00 AM
Thank you, Jan.
Date: 8/12/2018 4:28:00 AM
Very fun limerick, congratulations on your first place win!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/14/2018 1:01:00 AM
Thank you, Tania for your visit.
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