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Cat Got My Tongue

Aesthetics, her natural cosmetics. Innocent beauty slipped into my rhetorics. Haunting me quietly, silently hurt, left at a complete loss for words, No more thoughts of her for now, I'd just like to sit this one out. I'm breathless with nothing to say. Wish she'd stay, the next minute push her away. Cat like thief, she stole breaths from my lungs. Cat like thief, she makes me feel so young. Cat like thief, she's off again with my tongue.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/25/2010 5:58:00 PM
Love your descriptions...enjoyed reading...Marty
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Date: 2/22/2010 5:41:00 AM
Ow She got to you indeed..lovely poem:)and welcome to Our site..Charma
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Date: 2/22/2010 4:32:00 AM
Interesting idea presented here in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/22/2010 2:31:00 AM
Really enjoy your style of writing. aesthetically pleasing......Allie
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Date: 2/21/2010 9:02:00 PM
Good poem, and I love those last three lines of this one, Phillip. Very imaginative! SEe ya! ANDREA
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Date: 2/21/2010 6:38:00 PM
She certainly got to you, Phillip. You have a very compelling style. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/21/2010 4:02:00 PM
Clever little write Phillip, a warm welcome to the Soup to you >> James
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Date: 2/21/2010 1:44:00 PM
original! The comparison you give to a cat like thief is very creative. The overall thought behind this is beautiful, and the way you word it is simply stunning
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