Cat Got My Tongue

Aesthetics, her natural cosmetics. Innocent beauty slipped into my rhetorics. Haunting me quietly, silently hurt, left at a complete loss for words, No more thoughts of her for now, I'd just like to sit this one out. I'm breathless with nothing to say. Wish she'd stay, the next minute push her away. Cat like thief, she stole breaths from my lungs. Cat like thief, she makes me feel so young. Cat like thief, she's off again with my tongue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Owens Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 5:58 PM
Love your descriptions...enjoyed reading...Marty
Chircop Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 5:41 AM
Ow She got to you indeed..lovely poem:)and welcome to Our site..Charma
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 4:32 AM
Interesting idea presented here in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara
Lusha Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 2:31 AM
Really enjoy your style of writing. aesthetically pleasing......Allie
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 9:02 PM
Good poem, and I love those last three lines of this one, Phillip. Very imaginative! SEe ya! ANDREA
Devonshire Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 6:38 PM
She certainly got to you, Phillip. You have a very compelling style. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 4:02 PM
Clever little write Phillip, a warm welcome to the Soup to you >> James
Alcorn Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 1:44 PM
original! The comparison you give to a cat like thief is very creative. The overall thought behind this is beautiful, and the way you word it is simply stunning
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