Cat and Mouse

I used to laugh every day,
Now sadness takes those laughs away.
I used to hope that soon one day,
You would say you loved me.

I used to cry myself to sleep,
But now I just sit up and weep,
I feel the darkness start to creep,
And let it take me into its arms.

I used to hate the way I was,
I realize that’s who I’ve become,
And the sickening thought puts me on the run,
From the truth, the way, my life, my death.

I can’t ever seem to catch my breath,
From running from the endless death,
I face every day and now I’m blessed,
Because it finally caught me.

And now these chains, they hold me down,
I look and search for my way out,
But don’t you know that now I’m trapped,
In this place, that’s cold and black.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/2/2011 6:20:00 AM
so maudlin, dripping with want & need & longing, a most excellent write SOUP mail! Light & Love [label it RHYME]
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Date: 1/19/2011 3:53:00 PM
Mandy, your waiting emotions are sad.. i know the feeling.. so i just gave up.. i'm so impressed with your write.. and I love it.. I went through that cat and mouse chase.. sometime last year.. well i'm glad to say i fell back into the pit of darkeness,, enjoyed your poem,.(( adding this to my faves... love the chain line))....p.d.
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