Cat

Colorful coat leaving
Cursed once, but poignantly
Cherished fur tornadoes
Copiously on my
Couch seat while you snuggle
Closely as your thin frame
Captures love for what’s next

8/23/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hagy Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 3:13 PM
Really cute write Tom! Lovely feline...is she a calico? Hope she is with you for a few more years, their company and high jinks are well worth the "fur tornadoes". I have had cats and dogs all my life and I know all to well about the fur balls!:)
Canerdy Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 8:45 PM
A 7 for this fine piece, Tom! Janice
Quigley Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Thank you, Janice!
Merryman Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 12:02 PM
Such a sweet tribute to your beautiful cat! I love your descriptive line "cherished fur tornadoes". Congrats for your win in my contest, Tom! Blessings!
Quigley Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Thanks, Kim! Fun contests.
Quigley Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 11:44 AM
Sad, but an amazing write abba
Quigley Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Yep. :-( Thanks.
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 4:16 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poems, Tom :) - hugs and :)
Quigley Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise!
Neumann Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 3:15 AM
Congratulation on your win and your cat. Ours are still bouncing, on the laptop at times. For inspiration? Lost of wishes, Kai
Quigley Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Thanks, Kai! Inspiration is where you find it, or where it finds you, by climbing in your lap between you and what you're trying to do...
Wigley Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 12:34 AM
Congratulations, fellow Cat fan, on a winning lovely write. Much enjoyed, Tom. Regards, Viv
Quigley Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 9:17 AM
Thank you, Viv!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 9:47 PM
Cats are so loveable! Congratulations on your win! 7 ; )
Quigley Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 9:17 AM
Thank you, Connie!
Haight Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 7:24 PM
Very sweet tribute to your dear cat, Tom. I love cats and your poem says a lot about how you do too! Congratulations on your fine win in the 'Pleiades C' contest! Sandra
Quigley Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 8:57 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Hoffman Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 5:55 PM
Lovely. Expresses just everything about a cat and, apparently, yours in particular!
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 5:04 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Tom:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 5:38 AM
- Great, read with a smile :) - Good luck in the contest, Tom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Quigley Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise!
Turner Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 3:37 PM
Fun read Tom. You need to introduce your cat to Buddy. Then there will really be some fur tornadoes. Lol I think everyone should own a pet. Great write, Tom. Good luck!
Quigley Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 8:36 PM
Thanks, Daniel! She's got a canine friend at home, and it's made for some adventurous times!
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 2:31 PM
What a delightful picture of your treasured pet and a lovely descriptive poem Tom:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Quigley Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 8:44 PM
Thank you, Jan!
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