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t / \ /` I ;\ /.built ;\ /a castle; \ /. In the sky \ / out of ; :\ /, ; _ _ _ __ :\ [, concrete ,] [ [ ] blocks ;] [ [ ] ;] l”l l“’l l”’l l”’l [ l”l l“’l l”’l l”’l l [ Pinnacle ;] [ [ stained ;] [ Crowns ;] [and [glass windows ;] \ - ..__. .:--- / [ \..______ ..:/ [-----------]_l”l l“’l l”’l l”’l l”l l“’l l”’l l”’l _ l”’ [ ---=---=-] [ [ ] .;] to live a life that pleases God . [ *-* ;] [ * = * .[] Centered in an entranced island of [verdant.: ] [ l l . ] green /### \ garden, hues of [ colour .: ] [ l _ l .: ]blossoms ll ll vanishing under [ glowing.: ] [ = .: ] heaven ll ll Fireplace spitted [ to life .: ] [ .: ] torch ll ll lights flicker [ reflecting ] [ __, .: ] in the ll ll tower walls as [ lace veils ] [ .: ] hang of ll ll the ceiling casting[ shadows ] [ _ .: ]------------>======== < ------ --(____ ____) ( * -- .: )----- / Prayers for // ---------------------- ~ ~ / Strength // ~`` ~ ~ .. / Peace // `` ~ .. ~ / Hope // ~ ~ 11/21/2016

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Date: 1/4/2017 6:09:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your First Place win in the 'Castles' contest! Wow...it's amazing how you laid this Shape poem out so artistically with your poem's message embedded! Your artist and poetic gifts merged in one! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/4/2017 6:14:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra... tried the shape I couldn't resist. Hugs Eve
Date: 1/4/2017 2:31:00 PM
Congratulations Eve. That is something nice!
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Date: 1/4/2017 2:40:00 PM
Heidi, thank you for the congratulations and the complement :) Hugs Eve
Date: 1/4/2017 2:05:00 PM
A work of art congrats x
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Date: 1/4/2017 2:38:00 PM
Thank you, Wendy, congratulations to you as well :) Hugs Eve
Date: 1/4/2017 10:39:00 AM
Very creative Eve...Congrats on a great win
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Date: 1/4/2017 2:39:00 PM
Joseph, thank you for the congratulations :) Hugs Eve
Date: 1/4/2017 7:42:00 AM
Interesting effect, congratulations on your win Eve...
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Date: 1/4/2017 2:37:00 PM
Thank you for the congratulations , Charlie :) Hugs Eve
Date: 1/4/2017 2:23:00 AM
Wow, that is amazing with no other words for it. Congratulations on your win, Kai
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Date: 1/4/2017 2:36:00 PM
Kai, thank you for the congratulations and the inspirational complement :) Hugs Eve
Date: 1/4/2017 12:36:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant, Eve! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/4/2017 2:36:00 PM
Tamal, thank you for the congratulations and the inspirational complement :) Hugs Eve
Date: 1/3/2017 10:49:00 PM
Wow.... This is great... Both the content and the shape..... A big congratulations on your well deserved win.... A 7...
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Date: 1/4/2017 2:34:00 PM
Sorry for the Jump, Supraja, thank you for the congratulations and the inspirational complement it does inspire me :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/4/2017 2:32:00 PM
Thank you for the congratulations and the inspirational complement, Afzal :) Hugs Eve
Date: 1/3/2017 9:46:00 PM
A beautiful artistic work, Eve. Congratulations on your top win.
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Date: 1/3/2017 5:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Eve. How did you create the picture?
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Date: 1/3/2017 6:03:00 PM
James , thank you for the congratulations. I started with the structure first then filled in the blank, but still had problems trial and error... Hugs Eve
Date: 1/3/2017 4:22:00 PM
It's a pity that the website doesn't allow fixed width fonts for shape poems. However, this is still great! Congrats on your win Eve! :-)
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Date: 1/3/2017 6:05:00 PM
Mark, it funny you say that. On my computer it shows it is off in structure, but my small note pad is in perfect form so I'm not sure what is going on.... Thank you for the congratulations Hugs Eve
Date: 11/22/2016 1:05:00 PM
WoW! Eve this is amazing. Great shape and content. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/23/2016 1:33:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis, so much for the 7 and inspiring complement Hugs Eve
Date: 11/22/2016 12:41:00 PM
ohh, what a scenic piece and a sketch that mystifies, eve... just awesome... huggs
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Date: 11/23/2016 1:34:00 AM
Thank you, Nett, so much :-) Hugs Eve
Date: 11/22/2016 11:43:00 AM
A work of art well-done x and a premature congrats xx
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Date: 11/23/2016 1:35:00 AM
Thank you, Wendy,. Hugs Eve
Date: 11/22/2016 7:45:00 AM
Wow..This is amazing Eve...you did very well ...Loved the shape and words too..I enjoyed it...Good luck with the contest...A big 7...
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Date: 11/23/2016 1:38:00 AM
Thank you, Supraja, for the compliment , 7, and good luck :-) Hugs Eve
Date: 11/22/2016 5:56:00 AM
Splendid ... inimitable ...
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Date: 11/22/2016 3:55:00 AM
- Good morning, Eve :) - You have been expert in shape poems ! ... beautiful dream castle :) - A big 7 !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/21/2016 11:38:00 PM
This is really clever, impressive . Well done.
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