Castles In the Night Sky

dear sara it's really on of your most amazing poems , thanks for being that creative :) & by the way i always like your comments . Noura

Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry today Sara. I have enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol

Lovely piece Sara, i stay 5 miles from Loch Ness. We walk the dog along it's shoreline. In all weathers it's the most beautiful of places>>James

Going into my Fav's... Sara... I'm A Medieval Maid from the moment...my Grandma used to make quilt castles for me to play in... Quilts covered over Sofa and Chairs... and then the princess (me :)... would hold court... (smile) Thanks for making me think of that again... Seriously, though... I'm a sucker for days of yore'... and this one poem is good. MoonBee

Great Story, Ms. Sara. I'll bet your tardy Lover has put a lariat on that wild cayuse an' is doin' his best to rake'em down. He'll show-up here directly with the reins in his mouth, a bouquet of fragrant seaweed in one hand an beautiful coral (maybe a pearl or two) in the other. Yes Ma'am, only a few thangs will keep a man from his Lovely Lass. A change to break that 'ole Loch Ness is one of'em, I'll bet. Hee! Hee! Keep wait'n. He's ah com'n. JW ~ TexasCowboyIsh

Hi Sara This is very passionate too! I love the sentiments you convey and the longing of waiting for for your love's safe return. I think we are on the same wavelength today ha! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Oooh! This is outstanding, Sara! I love the imagery of waiting for the lover to return as you survey the landscape below. And the refrence to Loch Ness makes it even more compelling for me. Makes me wonder if the monster might have delayed the lover's return. Great sense of mystery as well as longing in this write! Love, carolyn

Simply lovely, Sara. This is such a tenderly written poem of love and longing with beautiful images. Love, Robin

hmm, your heartrob will be proud of this.... hmm, you must be lovely too. keep your pen dancing to the vibes of your heart. Love, Adeleke