Castle Rock Influence

Tonight I’m going to drink until I drown
I screw the cork from the Castle Rock
And here I go again, scribbling words down

The feelings linger, but yet can’t be found
My heart still hasn't learned to walk
Tonight I’m going to drink until I drown

Someday I’m going to drive to her town
I’m gonna’ go up to her door and knock
And here I go again, scribbling words down

I’m wasted and my mind is nowhere around
The ticks and tocks are falling from the clock
Tonight I’m going to drink until I drown

Dylan’s music was her perfect sound
She wrote all his lyrics down with chalk
And here I go again, scribbling words down

She was always my dearest proper noun
But she threw away the only key to her lock
Tonight I’m going to drink until I drown
And here I go again, scribbling words down

(Written for Anne's Villanelle contest, never wrote one of these before. I like this form!)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Roberts Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 11:01 AM
great job at first attempt at Villanelle, congrats on your win
Gorelick Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 7:28 AM
Troubled, but a great write. congrats. BG
Gorelick Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 7:27 AM
Troubled, but a great write. congrats. BG
Johnson Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 6:25 PM
Good work. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Lamoureux Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 3:35 PM
This is one of my personal favorites, very emotional and well written. Like you I have written my first villanelle. From what I can tell this is perfect. More importantly I love the emotion you have captured.
Andresen Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 1:03 PM
I am glad for your words in a well-written poem - Take care of yourself. - Good luck in the contest! - Have a nice weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dream Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 1:09 PM
Thanks for the kind words guys. I hope the day is being good to you both! Take care
Makama Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 9:11 AM
beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!
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