Castle On the Hill

am I my own castle on the hill?
here in my loneliness....
away from reality...my issues... your issues

some call it aloofness
that my life is empty
superficial......


my foundations, 
made with my own sweat and tears 
bricks hewn from my heart 
moat filled 
with my blood 
spilled by my own hand. 

"is my life style pretentious"....is ...
my castle built on firm ground ....no 

a princess far removed from normality
awaits the crunch of boots on the stone below
only the devil holds out a hand with a welcome
my eyes are too biased to see the light of hope

what is your castle on the hill
is it your thoughts, ones you have hidden away
or ones wandering your mind whilst you.... 
await, that kiss from a frog.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Palli Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 7:06 AM
Oh Seren, Excellent view from of the inner self! Amazingly good write.
Roberts Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 7:39 PM
Thank you Susan for stopping by....Seren
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