Castle On a Hill

Castle On A Hill

I saw a magnificent castle on a hill
Its towers up high piercing the clouds 
Conical roofs with slight golden shimmer
Brilliantly covered with a sunny shroud

But the walls looked old and tarnished
And the big metal portcullis was rusted
The moat was definitely all dried up
And the ditch was grime-crusted 

I wonder if anyone lives up there
If there is a princess on one of the towers
I'd like to be her knight and rescue her
If only I could climb above that flimsy bower

But this castle looked way too old
And abandoned as it lost its glory
My fairytales had a different picture
They did not look this profane in the stories

Instead it looks like one of those castles
They show in horror movies and cartoons
With a thundery night, full moon and a wolf howling
Housing a big frightening buffoon

Yes, that must be it
Its nothing but a scary old mansion
I'm glad I didn't linger there long
So much for a monumental attraction. 


20/04/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 1, 2016 at 5:53 PM
Sohini, congratulations on your castle on a hill win... love Linda
Mukherjee Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 5:49 AM
Thank u so much Linda :)
Rycroft Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 3:45 AM
Very good write well written xxxx congrats
Mukherjee Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 5:49 AM
Thank u so much! :)
Johnson Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 1:47 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem. Love, Joyce
Mukherjee Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 11:18 PM
Thank you so mich :)
Devnath  Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 1:02 PM
Congrats on your win with placement my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Mukherjee Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 11:18 PM
Thank you so much :)
Negron Flores Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 12:42 PM
Congratulations Sohini on the placement of the contest.
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April 27, 2016 at 11:17 PM
Thank u so much :)
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