Castle On a Hill

Castle On A Hill

I saw a magnificent castle on a hill
Its towers up high piercing the clouds 
Conical roofs with slight golden shimmer
Brilliantly covered with a sunny shroud

But the walls looked old and tarnished
And the big metal portcullis was rusted
The moat was definitely all dried up
And the ditch was grime-crusted 

I wonder if anyone lives up there
If there is a princess on one of the towers
I'd like to be her knight and rescue her
If only I could climb above that flimsy bower

But this castle looked way too old
And abandoned as it lost its glory
My fairytales had a different picture
They did not look this profane in the stories

Instead it looks like one of those castles
They show in horror movies and cartoons
With a thundery night, full moon and a wolf howling
Housing a big frightening buffoon

Yes, that must be it
Its nothing but a scary old mansion
I'm glad I didn't linger there long
So much for a monumental attraction. 


20/04/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/1/2016 5:53:00 PM
Sohini, congratulations on your castle on a hill win... love Linda
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Sohini Mukherjee
Date: 5/2/2016 5:49:00 AM
Thank u so much Linda :)
Date: 5/1/2016 3:45:00 AM
Very good write well written xxxx congrats
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Sohini Mukherjee
Date: 5/2/2016 5:49:00 AM
Thank u so much! :)
Date: 4/27/2016 1:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem. Love, Joyce
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Sohini Mukherjee
Date: 4/27/2016 11:18:00 PM
Thank you so mich :)
Date: 4/27/2016 1:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win with placement my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Sohini Mukherjee
Date: 4/27/2016 11:18:00 PM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 4/27/2016 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations Sohini on the placement of the contest.
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Sohini Mukherjee
Date: 4/27/2016 11:17:00 PM
Thank u so much :)
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