Castle In My Mind

In this castle
Created in my mind
A tree,
This tree
A scar
A jagged one 
Still healing
Blood dripping
Forms a path

Two watchmen
Chipping away
Away at it's skin
Creating holes
To suck out blood
Warning others 
To follow the path

The path
A constant path
Almost invisible 
Leaves an endless highway
That will not be seen
From 

Far away

it forms a thin
Long and Knotted trail
Small black dots
On this pathway
Twisting and turning 
Around the tree
In this castle
Created in my mind

None have wondered
Where this path goes
They follow the crowd
The sounds
Constant sounds
Almost silent
Leave prints
That will be heard 

Far away 


Calluses, Sores, and scabs 
Created 
From the non-stop endless migration
The rhythmic pecks
The perpetual stomps
Of these creatures
in my mind

Forever 
Endless
As it seems
When will one 
break through it's sea

The truth 
An unknown truth
Can be turned into 
Lies
The destination unknown
Cannot be reached 
As it is
So

Far away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 8:20 PM
Aidan yes some destinations are faraway. Some are not, even so this is a great poem. A 7
Dufaux  Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 1:51 PM
Thank you Darlene!
Rios Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 9:36 AM
Love the imagery, so the tree is the narrator am I correct?
Dufaux  Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 11:13 AM
Yes, that is correct. The beginning is from my perspective but then it switches to the tree. Thank you for noticing!
Vyas Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 8:56 AM
Beautiful thoughts and imagine
Dufaux  Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 11:13 AM
Thank you!
Lawless Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 6:50 PM
I'm not sure if you should get in - or get out of - that castle. An intriguing write Aidan. thanks for entering the contest
Neumann Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 3:03 AM
This is good and very meaningful in the description of the castles. The destination may remain unknown, but paradoxically it can be reached, after a long journey. Keep feeling and keep writing. Kai
Gupta Avatar
April 3, 2017 at 6:28 AM
Enjoyed being in the castle for a while ... sorry, could not longer stay ... though the castle had more to say ...
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