Casting Bread

old man fishing bread cast on water is he wasting his time

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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 11/17/2012 1:36:00 AM

Masterpiece, once more! The Living Bread is going to help your old fisherman and show he didn't waste anything at all: time will help him and...fish fry tonight for every believer. Blessings, Hanitra

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/17/2012 7:00:00 AM

A short time ago we were in Italy and watched this old man fishing with just a line hook and bread it was peaceful watching him, and he did catch his dinner.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/9/2012 11:40:00 AM

I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Richard. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2012 11:44:00 AM

Thanks Carol, you are very kind.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/9/2012 10:50:00 AM

Well done Haiku, Richard - poor old man.... - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2012 11:30:00 AM

I seen him while we were in Italy, he appeared to be quite content, sometimes wasting time can be relaxing. So in the end is it a waste of time?