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Castaways

Castaways
                                          Around the Rue
                                                    Jasmine hues      
                                                           Oh fluttering wings
                                                                                  Dance

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Camila Encarnacion

June 18, 2023 at 10:21 PM

So full of sweetness, like butterflies flying away . I wish I had your knowledge .

Tonytocaa Camacho

June 19, 2023 at 4:35 AM

You have Knowledge whether you know it or not you have acknowledged me witch takes understanding I lov your poetry sweetness just keep penning n go on stage n flow hugs tocaa

Camila Encarnacion

June 18, 2023 at 10:19 PM

So full of sweetness, like butterflies flying away . I wish I had your knowledge .

Richard Lamoureux

December 19, 2015 at 8:58 AM

Lovely, congratulations.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

December 18, 2015 at 11:15 PM

Wow great take with this lovely poem Tony.. Congrats on big win!

Joe Maverick

December 18, 2015 at 3:40 PM

Congrats on the placing here, Tony.'

Tonytocaa Camacho

December 18, 2015 at 5:01 PM

Thanks JM,I appreciate it peace be yours,tonytocaa

Poet Destroyer A

December 18, 2015 at 1:53 AM

Tonytocaa, Congratulations on your wonderful butterfly win. Love LINDA

Tonytocaa Camacho

December 18, 2015 at 11:25 AM

Thanks Linda, although not always my favorite type I enjoyed writing this one I think I prefer the hard-hitting ones best happy holidays peace n love Tonytocaa

Viv Wigley

December 18, 2015 at 12:40 AM

Nicely done, Tonytocaa, lovely imagery. Congrats! Regards, Viv

Tonytocaa Camacho

December 18, 2015 at 11:29 AM

Thank you mr. Wigley glad you enjoyed peace my friend ..tonytocaa

Skat A

December 17, 2015 at 7:29 PM

TONYTOCAA, I'm impressed, I guess men can write about any given theme. Thank you for supporting my contest. It was a delight to host. I'm still smiling after reading and closing and posting my new blog. Congratulations on your AWESOME WIN... Stop by my latest Blog "I GUESS THEY CAN... HOW ABOUT IT LADIES???" help celebrate and tell me why you decided to join THIS contest. Looking forward in hearing from you. Love SKAT

Tonytocaa Camacho

December 18, 2015 at 7:44 PM

Skat thanks,we can do anything, we all have the capability all we need is the key to open the door and the world is yours.. Blessings to you tonytocaa

Tonytocaa Camacho

December 18, 2015 at 5:04 PM

Skat thanks,we can do anything, we all have the capability all we need is the key to open the door and the world is yours.. Blessings to you tonytocaa