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Castaway Dreams

Warm summer breeze touching the palms Two bodies entangled on a hidden beach The moon enhanced by the Southern Cross The depths of our souls within our reach The scent of ocean, the taste of coke and rum The sand between my toes as we walk through the night The sight of a sailboat dancing on the water Caribbean blue touching the sand so white Untouched by progress, kissed by the Gods Deserted yet so full of life it seems I call your name and reach out for you Tears fill my eyes for my castaway dreams.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 6/1/2016 7:57:00 PM
What a lovely, and romantic quatrain, Vince! So nice to see you featured, and miss you and the old days, .....all the old friends from early Soup! Hope you are well!
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Date: 6/1/2016 10:54:00 AM
Nice fantasizing, Vince. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 8/19/2008 1:34:00 PM
Beautiful piece The imagery was very powerful. Keep up the good work.
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