Cast Out

A gray shadow looms
Feeling cast out in the world 
Bringing to surface
Old thoughts buried deep inside
Waiting to redeem in light











Example For Loneliness Contest
7-22-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 12:58 PM
This is a very good one on loneliness!
Negron Flores Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 1:38 PM
Thank you Andrea
La France Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 10:10 PM
Nayda , I love the line "old thoughts buried deep inside" great example for your contest, 7 ~
Negron Flores Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 12:01 PM
Thank you Constance
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