Cast Away

Cast Away
Waiting for you makes me feel
Like a cast away in Malden
So much golden sand
To slide my bare feet in

My feet feel each hot grain
Fills between each toe
Sun bakes the air around me
As I feel the warm wind blow

My eyes see an endless sight
Of such blue I can't take in
The waves, the crests, the tides
Loneliness, running thin

Waiting for you makes me feel
Should I hope you’d ever come?
I spend the day collecting seashells
Inevitably missing some

I’ll stare out into blue’s madness
Until the heat burns out my eyes
And never stop looking for you
Where the ocean meets the sky

Planes of rescue flew over me
While waves have eaten this coastline

I'm going mad in my sadness

Somehow wishing you would be mine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/30/2014 7:06:00 PM
This is a treat for the senses! What a terrific first offering. Welcome to the soup, you will fit in nicely.
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Lauren Smith
Date: 11/30/2014 7:07:00 PM
Thank you so much
Date: 11/29/2014 10:22:00 PM
Lauren, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Lauren Smith
Date: 11/30/2014 7:08:00 PM
Thank you for the warm greetings! : )
Date: 11/24/2014 2:08:00 PM
truly outstanding piece of writing very beautifully penned lauren
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Lauren Smith
Date: 11/30/2014 7:08:00 PM
thank you thank you thank you
Date: 11/22/2014 11:09:00 AM
You go to Contest Winners: Members. It is one of the choices in blue just to the left of your poem and comments. You entered Franks contest on Loneliness and you were one of the winners. Your name and poem is listed there.
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Lauren Smith
Date: 11/22/2014 11:11:00 AM
oh cool! thank you so much... : )
Date: 11/22/2014 10:28:00 AM
Lauren I love your poem. I am going to add it to my favs. Congratulations on your win.
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Lauren Smith
Date: 11/22/2014 10:34:00 AM
How do I know that I won? I don't see anything
Date: 11/21/2014 10:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Lauren.
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Lauren Smith
Date: 11/22/2014 10:12:00 AM
THank you, but I am confused. What win do you mean? How do you know that?
Date: 11/21/2014 7:33:00 AM
Such an amazing write Lauren! Many congrats on your win! Feeling good to read your smooth flowing poetry well woven with wonderful words my new friend! Trust reading much more from you!
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Lauren Smith
Date: 11/21/2014 2:54:00 PM
Thank you so much for the compliment. What do you mean by win?
Date: 11/17/2014 5:45:00 PM
Very beautiful poem, LAuren! I am also new to Poetrysoup. Looking forward to reading yours and many other's poetry!
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Date: 11/17/2014 2:09:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, LAuren - I choose your first moving and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Lauren Smith
Date: 11/17/2014 3:41:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! It's motivating to hear positive notes and inspires me to do the same.
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