Cast Away

Lost
stranded
thirst to live
found the way out
won




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Placement: 6th   (January 2011)

Contest:My favourite movie

Sponsor:Royal Trevino

By:kashinath karmakar(12th January 2011)

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Sharon Ruebel

January 17, 2011 at 1:23 PM

Hello Kashinath, You have gotten this down so well my friend! Congratulations on your win. As Always, Shar

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 17, 2011 at 5:57 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "My Favorite Movie" contest Kashinath sponsored by Royal Trevino. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

January 17, 2011 at 4:15 AM

Excellent win my poet friend!!!

Gert W. Knop

January 17, 2011 at 4:04 AM

My congratulations on your well deserved win, Kashinath! And thank you for your congrats on my 1st place in SKAT's contest! Have a nice week1...Gert

Eiken Laan

January 17, 2011 at 3:04 AM

K, this is a wonderful lanterne, well done on your win:))

Skat A

January 16, 2011 at 9:49 PM

kashinath, congratulations! on your entry~skat

Tahera Mannan

January 16, 2011 at 8:11 PM

Many congratulations dear friend for this win.

Diane Locksley

January 16, 2011 at 6:16 PM

Loved the movie as well as your poem. Congratulations Kashinath!

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 16, 2011 at 2:47 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, kashinath

Wilma Neels

January 16, 2011 at 12:39 PM

Hey Kashinath super congratulations on your win in the contest with this brilliant Lanterne ;-)

Andrea Dietrich

January 16, 2011 at 12:04 PM

Hey, Kashinath, I see I am sharing number six spot with you. Congratulations on your win!!!Luv, Andrea

Carol Fillmore

January 16, 2011 at 11:44 AM

Congratulations on your awesome win, Kashinath!

Carolyn Devonshire

January 16, 2011 at 10:41 AM

Delighted to see this poem in the winner's circle, Kashinath. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

January 16, 2011 at 9:21 AM

congrats! Kashi! good work!!! jimbo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 16, 2011 at 8:37 AM

Congrats Kashinath on your super success in the favorite movie contest with this creative and stupendous Lanterne my friend.. just knew this one would be on the winners list from previous read..luv..enjoy..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

January 15, 2011 at 3:00 AM

Very inspiring movie that was, and you said it in such few words, way to go (I always did wonder what was inside that fedex --was it fedex? box!) --nikko :)

Phyllis Babcock

January 14, 2011 at 1:15 PM

Now this is one movie I had seen so good luck on the contest. God Bless Phyl

Robert Pettit

January 14, 2011 at 12:52 PM

If you are referring to the movie starring Tom Hanks, then this piece describes it quite well with the few words it has. Just one thing: The word in your last line has two syllables. You need a word with only one syllable. How about replacing "triumph" with "win" or "won"?

Eamon Duffin

January 14, 2011 at 4:30 AM

Hi Kashinath. Thanks for your kind comment and for this well thought trip through a movie. Best of luck in the contest. Eamon

Carolyn Devonshire

January 14, 2011 at 1:27 AM

Awesome take on a fabulous movie. Tom Hanks' attachment to that "Wilson" ball reflected his loneliness and added such depth to his character. I was so glad he was finally rescued. Best wishes in the contest, Kashinath. Love, Carolyn