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Cast Away

The fog rolls in at the loss of a mother…by Poet
climb into the last time you feel cold sheets against your body others plump your pillow you hope to see everyone before you close your eyes to them they’ve dressed you in a lovely nightie cast away opened-back hospital gown you lay on death’s chest- there’s nothing to fear painfully know you have to let go. you feel the boat pulling you out tears stinging your eyes and theirs. the body’s staying, soul’s departing the shore. kisses on cheek and forehead blessing you. It’s final they’re grieving near the lighthouse a lookout for rocks the blast of a foghorn they’ve drifted into its midst lost half a year with the monsoon friends pick them up, wipe away their tears a buried treasure hugged from time to time 2/17/2022 E Forms- Etheree Sponsor: Constance La France HMS

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Date: 2/25/2022 9:53:00 AM
Amazingly crafted with such poignant imagery written from such a thought provoking perspective. Very original Kim. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2022 10:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sam!
Date: 2/24/2022 5:55:00 AM
This is gorgeously penned Kim "the body’s staying, soul’s departing the shore." A winner in every contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2022 6:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren! You always lift my spirits. <3
Date: 2/23/2022 2:56:00 PM
So beautifully written, but with such sadness. A lovely etheree. Congratulations on you well deserving win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2022 3:13:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 2/21/2022 10:16:00 AM
Very beautiful etheree. Congrat on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2022 11:46:00 AM
Thank you, Karen!
Date: 2/21/2022 5:13:00 AM
Hi Kim, What a well-written and heart-tugging write about your mother's passing. I found it to heartfelt and so poetic. Well done. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2022 5:49:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 2/20/2022 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the E Forms - Etheree contest, which you won with your lovely poem. You have earned it, laregely. Blessings and hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2022 5:48:00 AM
Thank you, Sotto!
Date: 2/20/2022 12:59:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your First Place win in my E Forms - Etheree contest with your beautiful poem, I loved it and your quote too ~Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2022 5:48:00 AM
Thank you so much, Constance! It comes from the heart.
Date: 2/19/2022 8:52:00 PM
Wow! That's all I can say. ~ Awestruck in FAVE-land
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2022 5:04:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend!
Date: 2/17/2022 7:21:00 PM
This is amazing Kim, the depth of feeling, the sentiment, the poetry. Love it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2022 7:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Harry!
Date: 2/17/2022 6:30:00 PM
okay, I'm impressed. definitely glad I stopped by to read this. a long way to go from my seussian rhymes to something like this, but that's something to aim for there, well done! and yeah, my wife and I observed this with both her parents a few years back, and it is hard, even when you know it is coming.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2022 6:41:00 PM
My Mom died last April…the anniversary will be here soon. Funny but death is in my last three poems. She is very near to my thoughts. Thank you for reading, sweet poet! I will go read one of yours :)

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