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Cassanova

.... is like a bottle rocket
          one whistle and then just a piece of trash that falls from the sky.

funnylight verse

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Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 10/29/2010 8:18:00 AM

when it falls,it truly becomes a nuisance to the immoral beauties...true it becomes a liability to naive 16's.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/28/2010 3:33:00 PM

Like this one..When they land, they are no where to be found by the lady that they tricked..Mom

Debra Eckstein

Date: 10/28/2010 6:39:00 AM

I use to hunt but what inspired me on this one was my dad. He is 75 and he got the biggest buck of his life.It was so fun he was like a kid who just got the new bike he wanted. Thanks for the nice comments. Liked your's very much .Take care Debbie Eckstein.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2010 8:24:00 PM

hahaha, Delightful!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/27/2010 2:23:00 PM

AH your words say so much my dear...Love Michael

Daver Austin

Date: 10/27/2010 2:12:00 PM

Once bitten. Sweet revenge, Doris. Down with all rakes and churls and varlets. Good write. Dave

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/27/2010 8:44:00 AM

Super awesome description Doris.. on this cad and character luv... been doing the children's hospitals and senior facilities for at least 10 years now. it started from our poetry group doing readings at the local places ..then expanded as our group kept getting invited back.. I took it a step further and began to do it on my own during the week too after work when I was working.. its such a blessing luv.. give it a try ..begin with your local places ...

James Peranteau

Date: 10/27/2010 3:29:00 AM

Hey...you dis'n me ? Smiles* great write dear poet ! much love, james

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/26/2010 3:41:00 PM

short sweet to the point, enjoyed. dear doris thank you for the kind thought, i do not intend leaving, but i had allready imposed a limit of around 30 writes on myself, and that time has come, i like to be able to offer somthing good to others, and that is my reason for a little rest.will be looking in on you.