Richard Lamoureux Poet Acrostic

Cash

Can you lend me some money?
Any amount will do.
Sometimes we all can use a break.
Help a brother out with some bread!


Four Letter words and Acrostic challenge contest. 
Wrote a second one because my word was not on 
the list.  Good thing I read  the instructions *lol*.

My original title was "Half Baked"

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Poet Destroyer A September 5, 2013 at 3:59 PM love it...PD Richard Lamoureux September 5, 2013 at 5:33 PM Thanks Linda

Sara Kendrick September 5, 2013 at 3:34 PM Enjoyed reading your winning entry..Congrats..Way to go..Sara Richard Lamoureux September 5, 2013 at 3:36 PM Thanks again Sara

Skat A September 1, 2013 at 2:04 PM Richard, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT Richard Lamoureux September 5, 2013 at 3:35 PM Thanks SKAT

Donna Jones September 1, 2013 at 8:17 AM Oh....has it all....love it Richard...congratulations Richard Lamoureux September 1, 2013 at 8:24 AM Thanks Donna

Eileen Manassian August 31, 2013 at 10:50 PM Congrats, Rick... Interesting acrostic...Soup Mail..when you've got a minute...

Andrea Dietrich August 31, 2013 at 5:52 PM I like the down to earth feeling of this one, Richard, and YES, I sure can use some bread too. hahaha. Congrats! Richard Lamoureux September 1, 2013 at 8:24 AM Thanks Andrea

Vinayak Pratap August 25, 2013 at 11:42 PM NICE 1 WAITIN 4 MOR Richard Lamoureux August 26, 2013 at 6:49 AM Thanks Vinayak

Allen Danie August 25, 2013 at 11:33 PM Nice one....hope to see more :) A~D Richard Lamoureux August 25, 2013 at 11:34 PM Thanks Allen

Sandra Adams August 25, 2013 at 6:13 PM love this acrostic...good luck in the contest my friend :) Richard Lamoureux August 25, 2013 at 9:29 PM Thanks Sandra

Cecilia Macfarlane August 25, 2013 at 3:05 PM This is great! Hugs

Just That Archaic Poet August 25, 2013 at 11:13 AM I was totally unfamiliar with this form until I read your poem, Richard. I'm happy that I am being exposed to so many different styles. "Half-baked" would have been an awesome title. Anyways, good job, my friend! :)

Eileen Manassian August 25, 2013 at 10:45 AM Good luck, Richard....We can use more "bread" around here....

Toquyen Harrell August 25, 2013 at 8:11 AM Are you sure, Rick, lol? Glad you are having fun writing it. So enjoyed! A fun poem. Richard Lamoureux August 25, 2013 at 8:20 AM Thanks Toquyen

Monterey Sirak August 25, 2013 at 6:53 AM Great poem. Haven't heard cash referred to as 'bread' for quite a while. Takes me back. Richard Lamoureux August 25, 2013 at 7:23 AM Ha ha!

Chris Boskovski August 25, 2013 at 12:04 AM Clever write and great poem! Takes the notion of the struggling artist looking for a break! I love it, reminds me of myself and my endless debts to my fellow friends! lol Great write Richard! from your fellow poet - Christopher :) Richard Lamoureux August 25, 2013 at 7:24 AM Thanks Christophe

Red Fiery August 24, 2013 at 11:18 PM Clever write. .I liked this too...very different from other works :) Richard Lamoureux August 25, 2013 at 7:25 AM Thanks Red!