Cascaded

I tried to embrace you
as a steep descent of a river
with an array of steps
and you only sprinkled lightly on me.
But I was wet all over
enjoying your warm impact
before you became cold in plains.
White as the snow of
a single night.
Your eyes black as 
moonless night
your lips red as 
the berries of the rowan tree.
Your body soft as the foam of a wave
Chaste, clean and sweet as
a river- a jet of water emanating
From your lips.
Lest I remain adrift
To kiss those inviting lips.
Before you become a cataract,
with strong currents and deep holes
Or may later become *Sete Quedos
of turbulent power but beautiful.


* a great waterfall on the border between Brazil and Paraguay

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September 21, 2014
Form: Free Verse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/18/2015 9:02:00 PM
An interesting use of metaphors here. They really help to express these powerful and passionate feelings... Congrats the win, Dr. Ram. Very nice work!
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Date: 1/18/2015 4:39:00 AM
a very special work gushing with love, dr.mehta.. big congrats
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Date: 1/17/2015 6:50:00 PM
This is a gorgeous write congratulations on your fine win!
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Date: 1/17/2015 4:05:00 PM
congratulations Dr M. on this fine winning poem
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Date: 1/17/2015 1:42:00 PM
Congratulations, Dr. Ram on a great win for this lovely romantic piece! Pandita.
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Date: 1/17/2015 1:07:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/17/2015 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful winning poem Dr. Ram!
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Date: 1/17/2015 9:04:00 AM
Hi Dr. Mehta, Nice raw images. Well done. Congratulations on your win. Have a great week end. Earl
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Date: 1/17/2015 8:17:00 AM
Beautiful, Dr Ram. Congrats. Ralph
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Date: 1/17/2015 6:43:00 AM
Congrats to you as well!
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Date: 1/17/2015 5:07:00 AM
This is not only romantic, but also very beautiful. I admire how you write about the river of your love. Congrats on a worthy win, DR!! #7 // paul
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Date: 10/1/2014 2:38:00 AM
Congratulations,Dr.
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Date: 9/26/2014 10:30:00 PM
Lovely, Dr. Ram... Thank you for entering and congratulations. God bless and happy writing. With love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 9/26/2014 7:43:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this Dr. Mehta. Congratulations on your HM
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Date: 9/26/2014 6:27:00 PM
wonderful descriptive write Dr Mehta congrats on your HM:-) hugs Jan
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Date: 9/25/2014 9:10:00 PM
A very insightful and lovely work of art Dr. Ram.
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Date: 9/21/2014 11:01:00 AM
beautifully penned as always dear friend
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Date: 9/21/2014 10:54:00 AM
Very lovely write Dr Ram! Unique take!
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Date: 9/21/2014 8:42:00 AM
A beautiful piece....much enjoyed....Tim
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