Cascaded

I tried to embrace you
as a steep descent of a river
with an array of steps
and you only sprinkled lightly on me.
But I was wet all over
enjoying your warm impact
before you became cold in plains.
White as the snow of
a single night.
Your eyes black as 
moonless night
your lips red as 
the berries of the rowan tree.
Your body soft as the foam of a wave
Chaste, clean and sweet as
a river- a jet of water emanating
From your lips.
Lest I remain adrift
To kiss those inviting lips.
Before you become a cataract,
with strong currents and deep holes
Or may later become *Sete Quedos
of turbulent power but beautiful.


* a great waterfall on the border between Brazil and Paraguay

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September 21, 2014
Form: Free Verse
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Deschler Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 9:02 PM
An interesting use of metaphors here. They really help to express these powerful and passionate feelings... Congrats the win, Dr. Ram. Very nice work!
Onclaud Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 4:39 AM
a very special work gushing with love, dr.mehta.. big congrats
Yvonne Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 6:50 PM
This is a gorgeous write congratulations on your fine win!
Stoner Jr Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 4:05 PM
congratulations Dr M. on this fine winning poem
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January 17, 2015 at 1:42 PM
Congratulations, Dr. Ram on a great win for this lovely romantic piece! Pandita.
Allison Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 1:07 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 12:11 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful winning poem Dr. Ram!
Schumacker Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 9:04 AM
Hi Dr. Mehta, Nice raw images. Well done. Congratulations on your win. Have a great week end. Earl
Taylor Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 8:17 AM
Beautiful, Dr Ram. Congrats. Ralph
Anderson Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 6:43 AM
Congrats to you as well!
Callus Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 5:07 AM
This is not only romantic, but also very beautiful. I admire how you write about the river of your love. Congrats on a worthy win, DR!! #7 // paul
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October 1, 2014 at 2:38 AM
Congratulations,Dr.
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September 26, 2014 at 10:30 PM
Lovely, Dr. Ram... Thank you for entering and congratulations. God bless and happy writing. With love and prayers, Gina
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September 26, 2014 at 7:43 PM
I enjoyed reading this Dr. Mehta. Congratulations on your HM
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 6:27 PM
wonderful descriptive write Dr Mehta congrats on your HM:-) hugs Jan
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 9:10 PM
A very insightful and lovely work of art Dr. Ram.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 11:01 AM
beautifully penned as always dear friend
A. Sharma Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 10:54 AM
Very lovely write Dr Ram! Unique take!
Smith Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 8:42 AM
A beautiful piece....much enjoyed....Tim
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