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Premiere Contest WinnerCartography of Meliorism

Written: June 04, 2026, for a contest sponsored by Bob Carmack **************** Horizons spun on a cosmic loom of distant empires, Egypt sleeps as a sunken palimpsest— a robed codex . . . crumbled vellum, papyrus, river silt, and raw glyphs dwelling in the hollows of her ribs. I limned their faded faults with a fingertip of anamnesis, each stroke a specter-sketch— a laconic lexicon buried in the chest, the one script I cannot utter aloud. Your chasms of ire, cataracts coruscating under a veneer of citrine-ness— you felt like the Nile: languid, imperious, with arcs of medieval thirst mapping your torrent . . . Sanctuaries swelled inside the fissures of your silence; Cleopatra-obelisk monoliths monitored the rhythm of your breath. Demons—fledgling, caterwauling— nested on lintels, rehearsing to be celestials. Polarity here is not an orphic strife, but a sacred cartography where shade and glare mesh— twin shores of one spate, a ductile fulcrum of fact and will. The cosmos swings on a single opus, a sacred seam— Empyrean seamstress welding dusk to dawn. A coruscation of orbs morphs into a map that hardens into an iron covenant. I stumbled over a synapse in a bare tomb at noon— a sudden brain-scorched desert firing. Primal petrichor broke the century-long drought. Kaleidoscope giggles—multivocal, bright— shattered our creed of molten limestone, where liturgical laughter loops, a sacerdotal scrawl from a raw soul. Cuddle or cringe, choice is not specious but fertile, a stalwart swarm of sequent sequels. You taught us to dread desire and chase chimeric vibes at every sight. Campfires amid night gloom waltzed as sun and moon—silky, serene. In the sand, our swollen steps linger as oxidized fossils of fever and faith. Each sharp scythe on the sifting floor breaks wheat from tare— leaving name-skeletons heaped, bones in shifting sands. Awe of each thorn, each stinging prickle— astonishing mentor— hubris dulls pain with its seraphic sanity. An angry lover’s fist scars the shrine, a futile votive deed. Even cruelty is a grim cousin of caress. Accept that joy may be earned, not whim— a hunger that lasts. Meliorism manifests as a magic map, that we often entomb. Wander over ruins, letting your love shine as a diaphanous, dazzling obelisk— casting a long, honest shadow on the shore. Let Egypt be the ultimate compass in a world of epochs, with its inked cartouches, fulgid dawns, and the sluggish, boundless river that recalls us all. Anger and love are similar to a map— a landscape is imprinted in our fossils, even after you pleat it. Egypt with her rain, and stillness, still spells her cryptic mysteries. The sacred map was never in the sand. It was embedded in our nucleus— waiting for the celestial glow, We dared to read it.
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Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 8:07 AM
Glad to see this is a trophy winner. Way to go. I wonder what the Egyptian beliefs are today. Thank you for sharing this one with us. 👏✍️. Sara K.
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 10:52 PM
You are on a trophy roll. Big congratulations here. 👏
Kerr Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 9:03 AM
A feast of outstanding literary germane word choices and stellar imagery on display for me and everyone elses privilege, Sotto. From start to finish a captivating command of the english langiage engulfs and elevates this pristine post. And your indepth knowledge too. Loved “a landscape is imprinted in our fossils,” but every line is peerless.🔥🔥🔥🔥 Congratualtions on your success. Heartfelt thanks for your insights on my Kimo. Hk
Guptar Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations dear poet on your top win in this contest with an exceptional poem, showinthat is astounding. g not only a master of diction, but also an erudite, with a vast knowledge expanse, I wonder how long it would taken you to carve such a feat. Wishing you a bright day
Ermine Avatar
July 6, 2026 at 2:41 PM
Great admiration for you, Sotto. You are intrinsically a part of your poem. A really remarkable feat, - all readers can absorb the trading, the games, the presentation of Egypt. Most enjoyable is your threading of words utterly outstanding, rich and beautiful.
Anaya Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 12:07 PM
Back with Congratulations, SP! In the spirit of positive change. Blessings
Carmack Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 8:25 AM
I noticed some familiar word pairings in this one. Clever integration. I also enjoyed the TED video. Congrats on your win and thank you for participating.
Anaya Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 3:40 PM
Sotto, it unfolds as a tour to de force, true to the origins of Egypt & mastery in this field. A fierce & profound ending, taken well. Words chosen, were a fantastic blend & worth the learn, "An angry lover’s fist scars the shrine, a futile votive deed." such an impact I felt, & subtle alliteration galore! Referenced Cleopatra & the obelisks Marvel. . . This is an enjoyable & intense read. I enjoyed the lesson shared (video). Blessings
Buhagiar Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 9:49 AM
We fly towards the Egyptian desert and antiquity. You must be well-versed in such matters. Some words needed clarification but there is depth in your poem. Best for a win.
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