Cars One

Cars One A coffin for your children A hearse for your fat missus A burden on the mother earth We will not be forgiven A curse to city dwellers A blessing for shopping mauls Noisy,ugly,overvalued Ridiculously LARGE More power than 500 horses Faster than a train Sophisticated self maintaining Millstones with a brain.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2015 9:21:00 PM

Simon,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 1/5/2015 5:13:00 AM

Welcome to soup dear poet Simon.Wishes. -Safa

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/5/2015 5:03:00 AM

- A warm welcome to the P - Soup and into the new year 2015 - I look forward to reading more of your poems this year - Hope you will enjoy reading and writing together with us, Simon - oxox // Anne-Lise :)