Cars

Mr. Ford, why did you make 
The cars which cause such deep heartache?...

From MOTs to punctured tyre,
Was that a gun, or did I misfire?

Parking tickets, yellow lines;
Wheelclamps, countless crushing fines;

Insurance costs, CCTV
Congestion Charge for you and me;

Broken mirrors, cracks and scrapes-
Stolen cars, false number plates;

Big bills from men I cannot trust,
Who warn of camshaft cracks and rust;

Some love to drive with beer can filled;
‘Who cares if I, -or they-, are killed?’

Road-rage, shouting, broken glass:
Some cannot let an insult pass.

The traffic jams we see each day
Seem made to wear the clutch away.
 
‘Was that a space that just went by?
Or must I drive ‘till our tank’s dry?’

The eyesore of the breaker’s yard
With twisted metal, dull and marred.

There’s poisoning from lead-filled plumes;
Monoxide clouds, and choking fumes.

Excuse me for the way I talk:
But Mr. Ford… today I’ll walk!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bettridge Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 1:07 PM
Great write Gavin. Right on the nail and I concur with your observations. That's why I scrapped my old Ford Mk 2 Mondeo and bought a bike 5 Months ago which I cycle everywhere on. Now, I actually feel sorry for motorists who are stuck in their Tin boxes running the gauntlet of the many downside aspects of being a motorist which you have pointed out with biting impact. Well done.
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February 15, 2015 at 9:53 AM
Gavin :) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. Hope you had a wonderful Valentines day. ~SKAT LOVE~
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February 9, 2015 at 1:03 AM
Nice poem Gavin, keep it up :)
Snyder Avatar
February 6, 2015 at 5:25 PM
Nice Gavin Pretty funny
Snyder Avatar
February 6, 2015 at 5:24 PM
Nice Gavin Funny
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January 31, 2015 at 1:33 AM
Gavin, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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January 31, 2015 at 1:05 AM
Gavin, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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