Black Eyed Susan Poet Sedoka

Carry-On

Sometimes they buy them
Other times they kidnap them
Because they need small babies
To carry their drugs
All over the world these dead
Babies go, cradled in arms


2/26/12
For "sedoka me any subject" contest
Susan Burch

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Poet Destroyer A March 2, 2012 at 9:05 PM SUSAN... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Sara Kendrick March 2, 2012 at 2:40 PM Interesting work that you have penned..Congrats on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich March 2, 2012 at 10:50 AM Hey, Congratulations, Lady!! And thanks so much for my win in your paper/plastic contest!

Christopher Bunton February 29, 2012 at 9:35 PM Congratulations!

Kim Merryman February 29, 2012 at 7:41 PM Congrats on your win, Susan! Love, Kim

Jonas L. Rozario February 29, 2012 at 10:54 AM Strong write Susan...congrats on your win.

Wilma Neels February 29, 2012 at 10:38 AM Sad reality of today's society Susan, congratulations on your win in the contest ;) Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown February 29, 2012 at 7:32 AM Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Sedoka Me Any Subject" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud February 28, 2012 at 10:41 PM well done witha strong social statement, susan... super cheers to you for hitting the charts! :) huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 28, 2012 at 7:21 PM congrats Susan on a dynamic win for these touching words written for Sedoka luv.. feeling strong emotion...

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2012 at 3:38 PM Susan, this is GREAT, you are imparting an important social message. The title is really Good!!!

Kash Poet February 27, 2012 at 12:43 AM Your Sedoka very effectively describes this cruel practice of drug trafficing.Good poem.