Carrying Romance All the Way

Carrying romance all the way
falling in love time and again,
a romantic heart you may say
dancing always in love rain!

Falling in love time and again
one way love let them be,
dancing always in love rain
hold no umbrella above me!

One way love let them be
only the rain should be pure,
hold no umbrella above me
she will come and dance sure!

only the rain should be pure
just to forget all the pain,
she will come and dance sure
join me in new love rain!

Just to forget all the pain
you can come and feel the bliss,
join me in new love rain
dancing with you is my wish!

You can come and feel the bliss
a romantic heart you may say,
dancing with you is my wish
carrying romance all the way!


10th May 2011

* A rhyming Pantoum
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A   Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 4:37 PM
Kash, I'm liking the rhyming game Joyce cooked up herself! Congratulations with your awesome poem, take care :-) * PD
Taylor Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 9:01 AM
Congrats on your win, Kash. Awesome write. Great job. Nice going, my friend. Ralph
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 6:44 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joyce's "Rhyming Game" contest Kash. Love, Carol
O'Leary Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 3:20 AM
Ah yes... love... intricate love... expressed in an intricate pantoum... and congrats... Terry
Williams Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 2:09 AM
Kash congrats on your great win..David
Mehta Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 6:07 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, kashinath
Brown Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 1:23 PM
Congratulations on your featured write this week Kashinath. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 10:44 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Kashinath. Love,Carol
Sundara Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 10:41 AM
That is wonderful.....great feelings!
Phookan Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 3:21 AM
Congrats Kashi on your win in this contest..well versed form of poetry here...gautami
Sweetheart Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 5:44 PM
Congrats Kash on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great one to share with us all my friend with luv..
Song Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 10:08 AM
You can tell spring is in the air bc many poets write of romantic themes.....this one is sweet and tender. Congratulations to you. Gwendolen
Horne Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 8:08 AM
Many congrats on your win, Kash : )
Richards Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 7:56 AM
What a wonderful thing to carry with you....bringing the romantic song along for a ride!! :) Congrats!!!
Sweetheart Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 7:05 AM
Congras Kashinath on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this magnificent write luv.. enjoy your wonderful win with luv for excellence..
Falotico Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 5:34 AM
Many congats KK!!!! wonderful wrte on who you are.... Proud to be in the same list as you....MJF
Beck Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 11:33 PM
all the world needs more romantics like you....well done ..I liked this one very much.....hearty congratulatins on your success in the contest ....best wishes
Buckeridge Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 11:21 PM
Many congrats to you on your win x
Onclaud Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 10:33 PM
swwweet with super congrats for the fine win, kashi :) huggs
Ronthorpe Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 9:24 PM
Very Good. Congrats
Sweetheart Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 4:38 AM
Luv to re read romantic poetry by u Kash.. a great one to start the day off right luv..
Onclaud Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 2:35 AM
sizzling with a touch of tenderness, kashi.. romance is such; amazing.. winning's best! come visit! :) huggs, nette
Henderson Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 10:45 PM
very nice kashineth, Pantoum not one of the easiest forms, but you did it justice.
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 9:24 PM
Kash, I am almost done for the evening. Just came here to wish you a goodnight!!
Richards Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 12:25 PM
What loveliness to carry with you....and to share it is even better!! :)
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