Carrying Romance All the Way

Carrying romance all the way
falling in love time and again,
a romantic heart you may say
dancing always in love rain!

Falling in love time and again
one way love let them be,
dancing always in love rain
hold no umbrella above me!

One way love let them be
only the rain should be pure,
hold no umbrella above me
she will come and dance sure!

only the rain should be pure
just to forget all the pain,
she will come and dance sure
join me in new love rain!

Just to forget all the pain
you can come and feel the bliss,
join me in new love rain
dancing with you is my wish!

You can come and feel the bliss
a romantic heart you may say,
dancing with you is my wish
carrying romance all the way!


10th May 2011

* A rhyming Pantoum

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/21/2012 4:37:00 PM
Kash, I'm liking the rhyming game Joyce cooked up herself! Congratulations with your awesome poem, take care :-) * PD
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Date: 5/19/2012 9:01:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Kash. Awesome write. Great job. Nice going, my friend. Ralph
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Date: 5/19/2012 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joyce's "Rhyming Game" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2012 3:20:00 AM
Ah yes... love... intricate love... expressed in an intricate pantoum... and congrats... Terry
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Date: 5/19/2012 2:09:00 AM
Kash congrats on your great win..David
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Date: 5/16/2011 6:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, kashinath
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Date: 5/16/2011 1:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write this week Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2011 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Kashinath. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/16/2011 10:41:00 AM
That is wonderful.....great feelings!
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Date: 5/16/2011 3:21:00 AM
Congrats Kashi on your win in this contest..well versed form of poetry here...gautami
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Date: 5/15/2011 5:44:00 PM
Congrats Kash on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great one to share with us all my friend with luv..
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Date: 5/15/2011 10:08:00 AM
You can tell spring is in the air bc many poets write of romantic themes.....this one is sweet and tender. Congratulations to you. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/15/2011 8:08:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, Kash : )
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Date: 5/15/2011 7:56:00 AM
What a wonderful thing to carry with you....bringing the romantic song along for a ride!! :) Congrats!!!
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Date: 5/15/2011 7:05:00 AM
Congras Kashinath on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this magnificent write luv.. enjoy your wonderful win with luv for excellence..
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Date: 5/15/2011 5:34:00 AM
Many congats KK!!!! wonderful wrte on who you are.... Proud to be in the same list as you....MJF
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Date: 5/14/2011 11:33:00 PM
all the world needs more romantics like you....well done ..I liked this one very much.....hearty congratulatins on your success in the contest ....best wishes
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Date: 5/14/2011 11:21:00 PM
Many congrats to you on your win x
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Date: 5/14/2011 10:33:00 PM
swwweet with super congrats for the fine win, kashi :) huggs
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Date: 5/14/2011 9:24:00 PM
Very Good. Congrats
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Date: 5/13/2011 4:38:00 AM
Luv to re read romantic poetry by u Kash.. a great one to start the day off right luv..
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Date: 5/12/2011 2:35:00 AM
sizzling with a touch of tenderness, kashi.. romance is such; amazing.. winning's best! come visit! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/11/2011 10:45:00 PM
very nice kashineth, Pantoum not one of the easiest forms, but you did it justice.
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Date: 5/11/2011 9:24:00 PM
Kash, I am almost done for the evening. Just came here to wish you a goodnight!!
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Date: 5/11/2011 12:25:00 PM
What loveliness to carry with you....and to share it is even better!! :)
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