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Carrion Watchers

Through the mists they land Carried by darkened wings, spread Sensing, they await Suspended death in decay Inhumanities now shared .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/10/2015 8:58:00 AM
Dino James, the last line is a lil intriguing for me.. but then you taught me again another word--carrion... :)!----warm hugs James.. :)!
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James Fraser
Date: 3/14/2015 1:33:00 PM
New words we will share often Oliz, for everyday shall be a school day for us, warm hugs back//James xx
Date: 3/6/2015 1:35:00 PM
vivid deep imagery James. I love the lines Sensing, they await Suspended death in decay.Most of our scavengers are seagulls but they do an excellent job of removing the roadkill:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 3/6/2015 2:03:00 PM
Evening Jan, thought I'd take a older different path for a few poems, as I do miss entering my darkened abyss <*> hugs, James xx