Carrion Watchers

Through the mists they land Carried by darkened wings, spread Sensing, they await Suspended death in decay Inhumanities now shared .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 8:58 AM
Dino James, the last line is a lil intriguing for me.. but then you taught me again another word--carrion... :)!----warm hugs James.. :)!
Fraser Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 1:33 PM
New words we will share often Oliz, for everyday shall be a school day for us, warm hugs back//James xx
Allison Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 1:35 PM
vivid deep imagery James. I love the lines Sensing, they await Suspended death in decay.Most of our scavengers are seagulls but they do an excellent job of removing the roadkill:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
Fraser Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 2:03 PM
Evening Jan, thought I'd take a older different path for a few poems, as I do miss entering my darkened abyss <*> hugs, James xx
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