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Carried Away

Lost in old tears, I found myself....
      carried away by weightless joys....
              to lose myself in what I found....










December, 31st 2014

inspired by - visual 1

nette's contest - 3 BY 8 IMAGE

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2015 11:58:00 PM

Kelly, Congratulations in John Lawless "Just Within Reach" contest. Always ~ LINDA ~

Jan Allison

Date: 4/24/2015 3:23:00 PM

Lovely to read this again Kelly:-) Hugs jan xx

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/27/2015 7:51:00 PM

I'm glad you enjoyed it, Jan! Hugs :)

Edward Ebbs

Date: 4/22/2015 10:01:00 PM

Sometimes less is more, congrats :)

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/27/2015 12:21:00 AM

Yes, that's true, Ed. Thank you for the congrats!

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/21/2015 7:37:00 PM

So profound and deep, Kelly. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/25/2015 9:12:00 PM

Thank you for your nice comments and kind congrats, Sandra! Hugs :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/21/2015 4:21:00 PM

One could lose oneself inside the beauty and depth of this verse...Congrats on a great win Kelly

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/25/2015 8:26:00 PM

Thank you so much, Joseph. I truly appreciate your kindness!

Carol Mays

Date: 2/3/2015 12:27:00 AM

Amazing power in three lines! Splendid poignancy. Thanks. Carol

Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/3/2015 10:34:00 PM

Thank you very much, Carol. This contest was a challenge for me, because I'm not used to writing such short poems. But, it was fun to try and get my message across in fewer words!

Funom Makama

Date: 1/28/2015 8:08:00 AM

oh! What agreat, great and lovely poem. I hope the new year if going on well,. Hoping to visit more of your pages

Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/31/2015 3:48:00 PM

Thank you so much. I really appreciate your kind comments!... So far, the new year has been good for me. I hope it is going well for you, too!

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/22/2015 4:50:00 AM

Kelly this is such a beautiful gem :) Congratulations on your win as well.. Hope 2015 is treating you good thus far!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/26/2015 11:22:00 PM

I really appreciate your kind words. Thank you so much, Wilma... So far, 2015 has been very good to me. I hope it has been for you, as well :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2015 9:46:00 PM

Enjoyable verse Kelly,,, congratulations on your AWESOME win, LINDA

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2015 4:09:00 PM

Expressive winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara

Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/15/2015 8:25:00 PM

Thank you very much for the kind congrats, Sara!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/9/2015 10:54:00 AM

powerful pen kelly really love how this drew for me dear friend excellent piece

Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/11/2015 2:20:00 PM

Thank you very much, Liam. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, dear friend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2015 10:31:00 PM

I thought yours was so amazing. Should have been in top three!!! Congrats though!!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/11/2015 2:10:00 PM

I truly appreciate that, Andrea. Thank you so much!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 1/8/2015 3:04:00 AM

Excellent. Deep thoughts and well said. Enjoyed . Tfs

Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/10/2015 7:32:00 PM

I really appreciate your kind comments, Ravi. Thank you so much!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/8/2015 2:28:00 AM

I really, really love your entry Kelly. Your last line brought this to perfection! Congrats on your wonderful win.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/10/2015 7:22:00 PM

I'm so happy that you liked my poem, Connie! Thank you so much for the lovely comments!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/7/2015 8:00:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/10/2015 7:01:00 PM

Thank you, Armand. I appreciate it!

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/7/2015 5:18:00 PM

Hi Kelly, wonderful poetic words for that picture! Congrats on your win! Sandra

Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/10/2015 6:49:00 PM

Hi Sandra, thank you for the kind congrats and comments. I appreciate it very much!

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/7/2015 3:54:00 PM

Well done! A great poem and a great win~!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/10/2015 6:37:00 PM

Thank you very much, Casarah!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/7/2015 2:05:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Kelly this is truly beautiful! :-) Hugs Jan xx

Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/10/2015 6:29:00 PM

I really appreciate your kind congrats, Jan. Thank you very much!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/7/2015 10:06:00 AM

Well done, Kelly! I like how you manage to lift yourself out of the box, whether it is by sadness or else by joy, as in this case. Hope you are still losing yourself to life's bright offerings. Congratulations on this fine win! Hugs // paul

Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/10/2015 2:45:00 PM

Yes, I am Paul. It is very easy to get lost in your life when everything about it is good... I really appreciate your wonderful comments, my friend. Thank you so much! Hugs :)

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/7/2015 9:22:00 AM

Congrats on the win Kelly...huggs

Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/10/2015 2:35:00 PM

Thank you, Kayode. Hugs!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/7/2015 9:17:00 AM

deep reflections well conveyed, Kelly... thanks for being part of my contest and big congrats

Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/10/2015 2:30:00 PM

You're welcome, nette. Your contest was so inspiring and it was a joy to write for! Thank you so much for including my poem on your winner's list. Hugs :)