Kelly Deschler Poet Verse

Carried Away

Lost in old tears, I found myself....
      carried away by weightless joys....
              to lose myself in what I found....










December, 31st 2014

inspired by - visual 1

nette's contest - 3 BY 8 IMAGE

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Poet Destroyer A April 25, 2015 at 11:58 PM Kelly, Congratulations in John Lawless "Just Within Reach" contest. Always ~ LINDA ~

Jan Allison April 24, 2015 at 3:23 PM Lovely to read this again Kelly:-) Hugs jan xx Kelly Deschler April 27, 2015 at 7:51 PM I'm glad you enjoyed it, Jan! Hugs :)

Edward Ebbs April 22, 2015 at 10:01 PM Sometimes less is more, congrats :) Kelly Deschler April 27, 2015 at 12:21 AM Yes, that's true, Ed. Thank you for the congrats!

Sandra Haight April 21, 2015 at 7:37 PM So profound and deep, Kelly. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Kelly Deschler April 25, 2015 at 9:12 PM Thank you for your nice comments and kind congrats, Sandra! Hugs :)

Joseph May April 21, 2015 at 4:21 PM One could lose oneself inside the beauty and depth of this verse...Congrats on a great win Kelly Kelly Deschler April 25, 2015 at 8:26 PM Thank you so much, Joseph. I truly appreciate your kindness!

Carol Mays February 3, 2015 at 12:27 AM Amazing power in three lines! Splendid poignancy. Thanks. Carol Kelly Deschler February 3, 2015 at 10:34 PM Thank you very much, Carol. This contest was a challenge for me, because I'm not used to writing such short poems. But, it was fun to try and get my message across in fewer words!

Funom Makama January 28, 2015 at 8:08 AM oh! What agreat, great and lovely poem. I hope the new year if going on well,. Hoping to visit more of your pages Kelly Deschler January 31, 2015 at 3:48 PM Thank you so much. I really appreciate your kind comments!... So far, the new year has been good for me. I hope it is going well for you, too!

Wilma Neels January 22, 2015 at 4:50 AM Kelly this is such a beautiful gem :) Congratulations on your win as well.. Hope 2015 is treating you good thus far! Kelly Deschler January 26, 2015 at 11:22 PM I really appreciate your kind words. Thank you so much, Wilma... So far, 2015 has been very good to me. I hope it has been for you, as well :)

Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2015 at 9:46 PM Enjoyable verse Kelly,,, congratulations on your AWESOME win, LINDA

Sara Kendrick January 11, 2015 at 4:09 PM Expressive winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara Kelly Deschler January 15, 2015 at 8:25 PM Thank you very much for the kind congrats, Sara!

Liam Mcdaid January 9, 2015 at 10:54 AM powerful pen kelly really love how this drew for me dear friend excellent piece Kelly Deschler January 11, 2015 at 2:20 PM Thank you very much, Liam. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, dear friend!

Andrea Dietrich January 8, 2015 at 10:31 PM I thought yours was so amazing. Should have been in top three!!! Congrats though!! Kelly Deschler January 11, 2015 at 2:10 PM I truly appreciate that, Andrea. Thank you so much!

Ravi Sathasivam January 8, 2015 at 3:04 AM Excellent. Deep thoughts and well said. Enjoyed . Tfs Kelly Deschler January 10, 2015 at 7:32 PM I really appreciate your kind comments, Ravi. Thank you so much!

Connie Marcum Wong January 8, 2015 at 2:28 AM I really, really love your entry Kelly. Your last line brought this to perfection! Congrats on your wonderful win. Kelly Deschler January 10, 2015 at 7:22 PM I'm so happy that you liked my poem, Connie! Thank you so much for the lovely comments!

Maurice Yvonne January 7, 2015 at 8:00 PM Back to congratulate you on your win. Kelly Deschler January 10, 2015 at 7:01 PM Thank you, Armand. I appreciate it!

Sandra Haight January 7, 2015 at 5:18 PM Hi Kelly, wonderful poetic words for that picture! Congrats on your win! Sandra Kelly Deschler January 10, 2015 at 6:49 PM Hi Sandra, thank you for the kind congrats and comments. I appreciate it very much!

Casarah Nance January 7, 2015 at 3:54 PM Well done! A great poem and a great win~! Kelly Deschler January 10, 2015 at 6:37 PM Thank you very much, Casarah!

Jan Allison January 7, 2015 at 2:05 PM Dropping back with my congrats Kelly this is truly beautiful! :-) Hugs Jan xx Kelly Deschler January 10, 2015 at 6:29 PM I really appreciate your kind congrats, Jan. Thank you very much!

Paul Callus January 7, 2015 at 10:06 AM Well done, Kelly! I like how you manage to lift yourself out of the box, whether it is by sadness or else by joy, as in this case. Hope you are still losing yourself to life's bright offerings. Congratulations on this fine win! Hugs // paul Kelly Deschler January 10, 2015 at 2:45 PM Yes, I am Paul. It is very easy to get lost in your life when everything about it is good... I really appreciate your wonderful comments, my friend. Thank you so much! Hugs :)

Kayod5 Kayode January 7, 2015 at 9:22 AM Congrats on the win Kelly...huggs Kelly Deschler January 10, 2015 at 2:35 PM Thank you, Kayode. Hugs!

Nette Onclaud January 7, 2015 at 9:17 AM deep reflections well conveyed, Kelly... thanks for being part of my contest and big congrats Kelly Deschler January 10, 2015 at 2:30 PM You're welcome, nette. Your contest was so inspiring and it was a joy to write for! Thank you so much for including my poem on your winner's list. Hugs :)

Dr.Ram Mehta January 7, 2015 at 8:36 AM Congrats on the win with apt interpretation of the picture, Kelly Kelly Deschler January 10, 2015 at 1:17 PM I really appreciate your kind comments, Dr. Ram. Thank you very much!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 7, 2015 at 4:30 AM Very lovely n emotional Kelly! congrats on big win! Kelly Deschler January 9, 2015 at 1:20 AM Thank you so much, Dr. Upma!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 7, 2015 at 4:01 AM Love Kelly. Congrats. rajat Kelly Deschler January 9, 2015 at 1:11 AM Thank you, Rajat.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 3, 2015 at 1:10 PM - Lovely for the visual one, Kelly - I wish you luck in the contest .... and a beautiful and peaceful New Year! - // Anne-Lise :) Kelly Deschler January 5, 2015 at 9:10 PM Thank you very much, Anne-Lise. I do appreciate your kind words and good luck wishes... I wish you all the best for 2015! :)

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