Carrie Street

Cracked sidewalks create obstacles for bikes,
racing down to the  big rock .

The older kids dangle from the porches,
smoking and laughing.

Ragged houses line the small street.
Some covered in signs of financial woe.

Foreclosure.

Little shoes on those porches,
too muddy to go inside.

The neighbors always yell
because they love each other.

The sky darkens;
porch lights on, TV's crackle.

The street is home. 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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October 22, 2015 at 1:21 PM
Courtney, Congratulations on "A child's first home WIN." **SKAT**
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September 26, 2015 at 6:28 AM
I really really like the feel and mood of this one, it feels real.
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