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Cavernous rooms bellow tomorrow's departure Void pools desperation Mangled clothes, makeshift pillows My hair collapses on your coat-hanger chest Its curtain opaques trepidation Foot worn wool fuzz carpet Absorbs awaiting absence Limb clinging disturbs fibres Summoning static air Captured, our fraught obtains courage Written for Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Contest : Some Kind of Sensual 'Carpet' 45 words (of 45 max.) 4th June 2020

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Date: 6/8/2020 9:37:00 PM
Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!
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Date: 6/8/2020 9:27:00 AM
This is absolutely gorgeous Jasmine! Congratulations on your win :)
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 6/8/2020 3:36:00 PM
Surprise for me! Thank you for taking the time, Aditi.

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