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Cavernous rooms bellow
        tomorrow's departure
        Void pools desperation

        Mangled clothes, makeshift pillows 
        My hair collapses on your coat-hanger chest
        Its curtain opaques trepidation 

        Foot worn wool fuzz carpet
        Absorbs awaiting absence 
        Limb clinging disturbs fibres

        Summoning static air
        Captured, our fraught
        obtains courage 




Written for Sponsor:

Nette Onclaud

Contest :

Some Kind of Sensual 

'Carpet' 

45 words (of 45 max.) 

4th June 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 6/8/2020 9:37:00 PM
Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!
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Date: 6/8/2020 9:27:00 AM
This is absolutely gorgeous Jasmine! Congratulations on your win :)
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 6/8/2020 3:36:00 PM
Surprise for me! Thank you for taking the time, Aditi.

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