Carpe Diem

on tree limbs jutting out over rivers sleepy gators bask, absorbing summer’s heat in fall, the sluggish reptiles do the same temperatures exceed 100 in the Sunshine State till November brings a brief reprieve water lilies, oleanders, daisies boast vibrant blooms until the first freeze perhaps December maybe January some years not at all as snowbirds fill beaches in fall locals return from summer homes up north when warm colors paint leaves Florida’s dogwoods and Bradford Pear trees are decked in crimson Water Oaks sport amber coats wild boar and deer enjoy the reprieve romping through subtropical forests in the welcome chill of autumn as hikers take to nature trails “Indian Summer” some call it when refreshing breezes ruffle foliage with only several weeks of autumn we’re blessed Carpe diem, seize these moments(/center> *Written August 31, 2014

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Date: 9/1/2014 9:35:00 AM
Such a lovely write brimming with excellent imagery! I must award you top marks for this one, Carolyn! It would make a perfect slide-show. Enjoy the new week....hugs......paul
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Date: 8/31/2014 10:36:00 PM
ahh, How I miss seizing the days on the Sunshine Beaches of the Space Coast and the lovely Golfo de México. The first stanza reminds me of driving across the Toll 417 near Orlando/Oviedo and seeing all the eyes of the gators on my way to work! Eerie and cool at the same damn time! Then, first part of stanza 3 takes me to the Panhandle, namely Destin, seeing the birds and SUPER SNOW white sand. Other portions are dead on "Honeymoon Island" near Clearwater, Girl YOU KNOW U SOME FLORIDA NOW!
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Date: 8/31/2014 12:30:00 PM
Absolutely stunning imagery Carolyn:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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