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Carpe

Diem

Events that live in infamy Some life-changing, others life-ending Hiroshima, the World Trade Center, areas struck by tornadoes, hurricanes, earthquakes Life that remains will never be the same Survivors are plagued by emotions of loss and grief Consider couples who fought over breakfast Or parents whose last words were reprimands A king’s ransom might be offered For the opportunity we still have Live without regret Part with tender words Express feelings every day Love alone lives on past tragedy

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Date: 1/20/2020 3:39:00 AM
Expressing feeling, that is what poetry is all about. Nice one, Kai
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Date: 10/11/2019 10:00:00 AM
Such alas is life, and the lessens we have to learn. Till we read a gem of poetry like this is..
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Date: 10/11/2019 6:18:00 AM
Be genuine and kind. The death bed’s no time to make up for what is lost. Nicely written, Carolyn! ....Kim
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Date: 10/9/2019 10:29:00 PM
definitely words to live by! :)
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Date: 10/9/2019 6:10:00 AM
- So beautifully described ... of truth and love, Carolyn - GL in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/9/2019 4:54:00 AM
Great entry my friend...all we have is each other, while the world crumbles...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 10/8/2019 12:16:00 PM
I Love this poem Carolyn and your words are so true we always point to our wedding ring as we wave goodbye it is either an 'I Love you' or, 'I'm sorry. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/7/2019 11:25:00 AM
Hi Carolyn: A beautiful message towards the end of the stanzas. Good Luck!
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Date: 10/6/2019 8:37:00 PM
We can't regret life Carolyn...maybe one day I'll come down and we'll go skydiving lol
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/8/2019 1:06:00 PM
That would be fun!
Date: 10/6/2019 2:46:00 PM
A great choice for this contest.. what a sad day it was..
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Date: 10/5/2019 9:05:00 AM
Beautiful, and it delivers a wise message, too. A very good poem which compliments the topical prompt of this contest, Carolyn. Have a lovely weekend. Hugs // paul
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/5/2019 2:47:00 PM
Thanks, Paul. We never know when our lives might suddenly undergo drastic changes.
Date: 10/4/2019 9:04:00 PM
this is really good writing, Carolyn. I think LIne is going to love it too. Deep one!
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Date: 10/4/2019 5:52:00 PM
Much to ponder in this one. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 10/4/2019 5:05:00 PM
Your words ring true Carolyn, love's eternal flame lives on.
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Date: 10/4/2019 3:00:00 PM
This poem holds such truth Carolyn. My children always end calls to me by saying I love you, which I return. It is so important to express feelings of love to family and friends. A wonderful entry for the contest Carolyn! xxoo
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/5/2019 2:49:00 PM
Yes, I always told my parents (and still tell other family members) how much I love them each time we talk. No regrets this way. Thanks for reading! Hugs, Carolyn
Date: 10/4/2019 1:08:00 PM
This is well said Carolyn, words to live by, should do well in the contest!
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Date: 10/4/2019 6:45:00 AM
Excellent words of wisdom..a special poem you wrote, Caroyln. A message to live by: Live without regret Part with tender words Express feelings every day Love alone lives on past tragedy.
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Date: 10/4/2019 1:18:00 AM
I love this. Your words are so true and a blessing. Bless you
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Date: 10/3/2019 7:46:00 PM
You got that right! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/3/2019 4:47:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful and true Carolyn. We do have so many blessings that a lot of us don't realize until we take the time to look. Your poem is a winner in my eyes.I'm not sure it could be said any better...time is short, life is short, make the best of everyday.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/4/2019 1:19:00 PM
You're so sweet, Chris. I'm really glad you returned to Soup as I enjoy reading your poetry.
Date: 10/3/2019 4:43:00 PM
Excellent message in this poem and a reminder of such heartbreak people went through. Well written! Thank you :)
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