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Carpe Diem

individual
      introspection
     in
  intimate
emotions,
flows with
    bias,
     naivety
     to the fore
striving
for
perfection
lost
in
the matter-of-fact
and
the
tedium
of daily detail

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Date: 11/12/2018 8:29:00 AM
'Lost in the tedium of detail' -- You have pinpointed the stumbling block for so many of us, myself so obviously included. Onward! To seize the day! Nicely done, Brian! Best wishes, Gershon
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/12/2018 2:30:00 PM
Thanks Gershon
Date: 11/7/2018 2:59:00 PM
Brilliant - love this gem. A definite FAVE for me.
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/7/2018 3:20:00 PM
Thanks Line
Date: 11/7/2018 4:53:00 AM
So, matter-of-fact comes through unity! // great
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/7/2018 6:00:00 AM
Thanks Mahtab for your observations

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