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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ childhood dreams whirl~ dizzying, gleeful blur. popcorn smell wafts through the air. cotton candy clouds drift by~ laughter reverberates across time. shadows lengthen, dusk d e s c e n d s steeds slow, music fades. time dissolves~ carousel of yesterday.
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