Carousel

CAROUSEL

Sights, sounds, smells of the beachfront,
music , lights and shiny mirrors,
painted ponies with golden poles,
beckon me to ride.

I point to the one with the bright blue mane,
two arms steady me on its’ back,
my pony poised to carry me,
wherever it wants to go.

As my steed spins around 
and others pace alongside me,
excitement dances in our eyes
while throngs of laughter fill the air.

Revisiting this favorite place,
the music lures me once again,
now brave enough to ride alone, 
the two arms wave each time I pass.

The stride seems somewhat slower now,
the music plays now quite as loud,
the destination now my choice,
wherever I choose to go. 


My yesterday have all come and gone,
sadly I’ve grown too tall  it seems,
my two arms hold him tight to ride,
wherever he dreams to go.

Time is fleeting and today,
the lights are off, the ponies gone,
the organ music plays no more,
it's melody wafting on the breeze.

For the smile it stamped upon my heart,
for the joy it brought into my soul,
this memory I'll treasure throughout  my life
the magic of the carousel.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 7:13 PM
This is really good! We have the remains of one of the oldest carousels at Knoebel's Grovein Pa. The artwork is amazing. There was also a very old one in Lakeside Pa. that is long gone. Those days were priceless.
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September 27, 2009 at 1:21 PM
I like the light feeling of this one. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 2:45 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 12:03 AM
Liz, congrats on your feature...Raul
Fraser Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 11:12 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem>>James
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 7:03 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Liz. May you have many more. Do continue to write and share with us. Love, Carol
Tugaff Avatar
July 5, 2009 at 10:38 PM
This poem brings me back to my childhood. Thanks for the memories and congratulations my friend.
Eggins Avatar
July 5, 2009 at 8:26 PM
Lovely poem congrates on spotlight ... Will read more of you when I get time ... Love Jayne
Brown Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 5:48 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Liz. I am hoping to see many more poems here written by you. Love, Carol
Spence Sr Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 12:42 PM
This is excellent. I can also remember those days clearly. This is magical and flows so well. The title is consistent with each stanza. Great job and welcome to the Soup! ~Joseph
Fraser Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 3:06 PM
Memories of the seaside for me Liz, nice poem - James
Curcio Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 9:58 AM
This is lovely and filled with vivid pictures of beloved memories.
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