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Carolyn's Ranch

. One night on Carolyn's Ranch under the star lit skies whilst the breeze played with her tresses and mine eyne roved hern pretty there were no horses nor saloons yet one could hear the ricocheting from left to right This had to be the 'James Gang' for the words they riddled they rang they cracked Since that star lit night on the Devonshire Ranch looking back yep Touche’ Carolyn...mi amiga

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/16/2009 9:28:00 PM
Man, we got a James gang on soup ... and no dandy sheriff ... what is poor Carolyn to do ... join them like that Patty Hearst ... and then for the ware she would be no worse ... rounding up outlaws with her wisdom of gold.
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Date: 6/8/2009 4:39:00 PM
BTW, I want to thank you again for being such a great friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/8/2009 4:37:00 PM
Oh, to see the James Gang ride up to my ranch! 'Twould be a dream come true, James. Once we let the gang loose, who knows where they'll go next? Bravo! Thank you for this star-filled night ride through the old West. Love the meter! Great write, James! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/7/2009 6:04:00 PM
Oh you guys! Your having way to much fun! Keep it up! BG
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Date: 6/7/2009 1:19:00 PM
As part of the infamous "James Gang"....you are having way too much fun...the three amigos are on the loose !! :)
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Date: 6/7/2009 9:25:00 AM
great write! James, wishin' you 'dry kindlin' keep the campfires burnin! (I suggest you avoid a visit to Northfield Mn. about an hr. south of where I live!) and thanks for your fun comments! James
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Date: 6/7/2009 6:31:00 AM
Very good piece of writing my friend...nicely done.
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Date: 6/7/2009 6:19:00 AM
Lovin This One!
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Date: 6/7/2009 6:07:00 AM
hope your star light shines forever so you give us beauty of this kind--beautiful write and wonderful tribute to a special talented poet,but much more than that--a good friend--excellent write--charma;)
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