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Carolyn Devonshire, My Poetic Sister

 
"Live without regret. Part with tender words. Express feelings every day. " Quote - Carolyn Devonshire Has it really been over a year since you left? Carolyn, you were my poetic sister and friend, since that long ago day you joined Poetry Soup; and shared your pen and beautiful poetry, I am so happy it remains- I go there often ! You lived in Florida near the ocean you loved, it makes me smile to think of you fishing; and not just any- but fish from the deep blue, I miss our chats about our mutual gardens; comparing our flowers and our flower failures ! I will never view the ocean the same ever again, for now your ashes mingle with the crashing waves; it was your wish to join your beloved in the blue, and I am thankful you had a friend who made sure; your ashes were thrown from his boat ! So, many times you invited me to visit- wish I had, we have lost many beloved poets over the years; from this incredible community and it hurts, and your death, like the others, is a dagger still bleeding; I will keep a piece of your soul within my heart forever ! I promise to remember you Carolyn- your kindness, your talented pen, imagination and your gentle nature; I keep the shells you sent me from the beach close, and in my mind, I imagine you healthy on that ocean beach; kicking the sand- your laughter like a melody drifting. _______________________ December 13, 2022 Poetry/Verse/Carolyn Devonshire, My Poetic Sister Copyright Protected, ID 12-1508-564-13 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Who Is Your Best PS, Poet or Poetess sponsor, Sotto Poet, Judged 01/01/2023 First Place
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Roper Avatar
January 3, 2023 at 8:44 PM
Congratulations on your win, Constance, she will always be in our hearts . May you have many blessings this new year of 2023.
La France Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 7:06 AM
Eve, thank you for the visit, congratulations and comment. Yes, she will always be an angel watching over us, blessings for 2023, Constance
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January 2, 2023 at 2:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. She would be very happy with your write. Carolyn was a lovely poet and someone I called friend. I still miss her. In heaven we will all meet up, laugh/write again.......................
La France Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 3:26 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the visit, congratulations, compliment and comment, Constance
Alex Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 9:32 PM
Carolyn Devonshire was my favorite poet as well. I had written a tribute to her last year. This work of yours is very great. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 12:54 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the visit, comment, compliment and congratulations, Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 7:00 PM
I miss our chats about our mutual gardens; comparing our flowers and our flower failures… and in my mind, I imagine you healthy on that ocean beach; kicking the sand- your laughter like a melody drifting... I see why this is a winner! Congratulations, Constance!
La France Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 12:55 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the visit, comment, compliment and congratulations, Constance
Poet Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 4:56 PM
Congratulations on your top win in my contest, Constance. Your poem was lovely and you make a good choice. Blessings
La France Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 12:56 PM
Sotto, thank you so much for the contest, and my wonderful placement, and the congratulations and compliment, blessings, Constance
Kauffman Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 1:01 PM
Great choice Constance. I was thinking about Carolyn the other day and missing her.
La France Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 1:05 PM
Sam, thanks for the visit, sometimes I cannot believe Carolyn is gone, she was a very special person and my poetic friend for years, blessings
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