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Carolina Pines

Turned it loose and got drunk As a smelly old skunk On disgusting cheap wine In the Carolina pines Shot guns at thin air (Who the heck gonna' care?) Weren't it fun, weren't it fine In the Carolina pines? Then we REALLY got clobbered We staggered and slobbered We wallowed like swine In the Carolina pines (In the morning we grieved We hocked and we heaved We whimpered and whined In the Carolina pines) By: tryerson Motif: Nature

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/26/2015 3:22:00 PM
You are truly unique
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Date: 5/25/2014 8:14:00 PM
haha, this is short and funny. an oldie of yours I never saw. soupmail.
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Date: 3/10/2014 6:05:00 AM
Very Wonderful write. Congrats on the win, tim
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Date: 3/10/2014 2:28:00 AM
Tim, awesome win. ~ Love ~ SKAT
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Date: 3/9/2014 4:57:00 PM
- A wonderful poem posted for Giorgio A.V. contest - "Impress me with a small poem III" - Congratulations on your win, Tim !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/24/2013 11:18:00 AM
Tim... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Enjoy the new coming week, and Thanksgiving Holiday.. Always a poet friend <3 =LINDA
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Date: 11/22/2013 11:51:00 AM
Tim, Congratulations on having your poem Featured this week. Loving ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/20/2013 2:34:00 PM
Funniest thing I've read in a while. LOL What a hoot! ( Mine was tequila on a mountain in Utah. Broke my toe when I stumbled over a log). Haven't had a drop since :)
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:07:00 AM
At least it started out fun! A very enjoyable poem. Congrats on being featured.
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Date: 9/13/2009 11:23:00 AM
Pick me up please I am rolling on the floor laughing and can not get up Tim. You just made my day my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2009 12:58:00 PM
An adventure that led you to grive and heave, yet it sounds like you had some fun that night "In the Carolina pine." Enjoyed the read! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/12/2009 12:13:00 PM
Sounds like a terrible time. Never been there. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/12/2009 11:33:00 AM
Loved the third stanza, thanks for sharing ...Raul
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