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Carol But the memories linger still, of the heart that gave a thrill, when once you were so sweetly kist, outside was the morning mist, you cried... but there inside your heart, it lives, thoughts and feelings do forgive, you walked the path you had to live, but memory does reside...
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Date: 9/30/2011 8:01:00 PM
provocative, charming..a bit haunting! Lovely WIN. Light & Love
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Don Johnson
Date: 9/30/2011 10:40:00 PM
light n love for Debbie Guzzie, may her health be shining bright, no more blockage of her meridian, may her spirit soar , that's right...
Date: 9/30/2011 6:41:00 PM
Well Carol, you know you inspired this poem, by this unknown little gnome, peace n happiness for you, johnson wants it, be it true!!! sometimes:)
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Date: 9/30/2011 4:28:00 PM
Enjoyed reading of memory lane..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/30/2011 4:13:00 PM
Very nice Don!Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/30/2011 11:43:00 AM
Congrats DON on another grand win with this sensitive write luv.. super feeling ...
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Date: 9/30/2011 10:03:00 AM
Good morning and congratulations on your win in Brian's "Verse" contest Don. Love, Carol
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Don Johnson
Date: 9/30/2011 6:48:00 PM
Well Carol, you know you inspired this poem, by this unknown little gnome, peace n happiness for you, johnson wants it, be it true!!! sometimes:)
Date: 9/26/2011 3:19:00 PM
beautiful...very detailed..love it
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Date: 9/23/2011 11:35:00 PM
I really love this one about Carol, Don.
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Date: 9/22/2011 2:54:00 AM
this is really nice DON.thanks for sharing
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Date: 9/21/2011 7:26:00 PM
What a fantastic write there Don! Is this a relationship of yours long past? Or are you exercising the poetic license? Whichever, it's still an awesome poem! Great work!!
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Don Johnson
Date: 9/21/2011 10:43:00 PM
Carol knows, comment is, time sure knows, the words were his:)

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