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Carnival Contest

Wild rides, Bright costumes allure, Like Broadway, In hard times, Distorted laughter echoes, A cheap treat for all. Gaudy lights, Masks with painted smiles, Festivals In the dark, A house of many faces, Screams of sheer delight. By sabina written 8/15/11 contest: Carnival

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Sunflower Poetess

Date: 8/23/2011 8:36:00 PM

Congrats Sabina, Magnificent first place win ~~Glenna

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/23/2011 8:11:00 PM

i see it clearly...nice win! light& love

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 8/23/2011 6:39:00 PM

congrats on your excellent 1st place win in the contest :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2011 4:01:00 PM

this is very cool with the imagery!! congrats on your top win.

Kash Poet

Date: 8/23/2011 1:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your 1st place win,Sabina.beautiful write.

Tony Lane

Date: 8/23/2011 12:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Tony

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 8/23/2011 10:29:00 AM

Dancing, merrymaking, fun food and lots of noise...lol Congratulations, fascinating write. 1st place is great! Caryl Ramsdale

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/23/2011 10:22:00 AM

1st place !!! How wonderful and deserving sincere congratulations, Sabrina!! Hooray for you!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/23/2011 9:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Share A Shadorma" contest Sabina. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/23/2011 8:54:00 AM

Congrats Sabina on your big first place win luv.. super imagery..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/23/2011 8:54:00 AM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of nette, Sabina

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/23/2011 7:54:00 AM

entertaining and poignant, Sabina. Congrats on a well deserved win . Kudos to you for first place and top glory

John Freeman

Date: 8/23/2011 6:25:00 AM

So pleased Sabina to see your worthy poem rated at the top. Congratulations on your worthy presentation. Agape, Moses

David Williams

Date: 8/23/2011 3:44:00 AM

hey Sabina congrats on your win loved the different side you portrayed in yours, David

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/22/2011 11:38:00 PM

sabina, you took a route that made the theme more multi-layered.. the comapre and contrast approach worked really wel.. cheers! :) huggs

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/22/2011 10:28:00 PM

Sabina, Loved the wording gaudy-and the distorted mirrors. How fun! I must live in a poor town bc we have not had these distorted mirrors in any of our carnivals. Best to u and your future writing. Congrats at the top of the podium. Gwendolen

Sabina Nicole
Date: 8/22/2011 11:06:00 PM

lol, I have been to many different carnivals, my town did not have the best ones either, thank you Gwendolen:)

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 8/22/2011 10:18:00 PM

Congrats on the first place win, Sabina! Way to go! Really liked the comparison to Broadway. :-) Cyndi

Nancy Jones

Date: 8/22/2011 9:42:00 PM

Like Broadway in hard times... Awesome! congrats, Sabina, on the well-deserved win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2011 8:45:00 AM

I am so thrilled by the poetry I am reading this morning. Looks like everyone has found a pipeline to inspiration. This is wonderful and I am so happy your poetry is right here in this mix Sabina. Thank you so much for sharing. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/15/2011 3:52:00 PM

Wonderful write for the contest with visuals, Sabina