Carnival

Carnival
Bright lights, loud music.
Fun, food, shows.
Exhibits,
Fleeting glimpse of fantasy.
Normalcy returns.

Aftermath,
Memories remain,
Bringing smiles.
Carnival,
So much fun, so little time.
Souvenirs, dreams kept.

                                Judy Ball

Aug.15,2011
Share a Shadorma contest by Nette Onclaud

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John Freeman

Date: 8/23/2011 10:36:00 PM

Congratulations Judy on a worthy present for the contest. Agape, Moses

Judy Ball
Date: 8/24/2011 5:23:00 PM

Thanks so much John. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2011 9:56:00 PM

I really like this one, Judy. I'd have put it higher on the list!

Judy Ball
Date: 8/24/2011 5:37:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea. God Bless, JB

Kash Poet

Date: 8/23/2011 2:09:00 PM

Congrats Judy on your well deserved win in Nette's contest.

Jack Horne

Date: 8/23/2011 12:23:00 PM

I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : )

Judy Ball
Date: 8/23/2011 1:33:00 PM

Thanks so much Jack. God Bless, JB

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 8/23/2011 12:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning placement in nette's Shadorma contest. It's always over to soon huh! Caryl Ramsdale

Judy Ball
Date: 8/23/2011 12:07:00 PM

Thanks so much my friend. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/23/2011 10:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Share A Shadorma" contest Judy. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 8/23/2011 10:18:00 AM

No problem, everyones makes a mistake some time or the other. Love ya, Carol

Judy Ball
Date: 8/23/2011 10:16:00 AM

OOps meant to say CAROL. lINDA IS RIGHT BELOW YOU. SORRY. :)

Judy Ball
Date: 8/23/2011 10:14:00 AM

Thanks so much Linda. Glad you liked this and thanks so much for keeping in touch even on your vacation. Hope yure having a fantastic time. God Bless, JB :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/23/2011 9:27:00 AM

Congrats Judy on a great 7th place win with this elegant entry my friend..on carnival.. enjoy from Florida..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/23/2011 9:17:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Judy

David Williams

Date: 8/23/2011 4:10:00 AM

hey Judy congrats on your win, so much fun is right, David

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/19/2011 9:13:00 PM

Hey Judy, I believe I like the ending of your shadorma the best. You came so FULL CIRCLE. Souvenirs is the proper spelling...see if u can make a revision b4 she judges it. She is a professor so I am sure she's a stickler. I could be wrong though.....I remember hating to go home from a carnival as a child..then smelling my clothes the next day...the funnel cakes....ohhh ahhhh ohhhh ahhhh. Gwendolen

Judy Ball
Date: 8/19/2011 11:35:00 PM

Thanks so much Gwen. I'll fix the spelling. An oversight. Glad you liked this. God Bless, JB

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/16/2011 12:18:00 PM

Beautifully penned Shadorma, good luck in tghe contest, Judy

Judy Ball
Date: 8/16/2011 12:38:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend for stopping by to read for me again. Much appreciated. My first try on this form. God Bless, JB

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/15/2011 3:55:00 PM

that sums it up really well Judy and vibrant words of description make this one wonderful..good luck luv..

Judy Ball
Date: 8/15/2011 8:00:00 PM

Thanks Linda. It's my first effort so I wasn't really sure about it. Thanks bunches. God Bless, JB

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/15/2011 3:46:00 PM

Wonderful entry to the contest. But we are expected to write two pieces. I think this is one piece. Please make it sure. Judy. I also wrote some shadorma. Of course still not entered in the contest.

Judy Ball
Date: 8/15/2011 10:56:00 PM

Thanks so much my friend. I thought she meant two pieces making up six lines. I'll see what I can do. God Bless, JB

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 8/15/2011 3:07:00 PM

very creative...a well-said thought~~~but is it a requirement that it should be 2 verses....I'm pretty sure this is enough to win...but better review the rules for the contest~~~smile~~~this is a great art though~~~*-*junjun