Shadow Hamilton Poet Villanelle

Carnal Feelings

My carnal feelings fly sky high
as you walk towards me smiling
turned on I let out a sigh.

Fingers trace down towards my thigh
setting my insides quivering
my carnal feelings fly sky high.

I blush and squirm going all shy
the warm flush setting loose feelings
turned on, I let out a sigh.

I wilt in your arms  ending nigh
as  our passions mix exploding
my carnal feelings run high.

Emotions running hot and high
course through veins like streaked lightning
turned on, I let out a sigh.

Slowly the world stops revolving
tensions freed both now quivering
my carnal feelings run high
turned on, I let out a sigh.

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Ralph Sergi October 25, 2015 at 8:36 AM Hi Shadow: A very sensual and excellent villanelle. My compliments.

Constance La France October 23, 2015 at 6:24 PM Shadow, oh so hot and sexy, a sweet 7 and I want to thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your Golden Eagle contest, I am honored ~~ Shadow Hamilton October 23, 2015 at 7:09 PM ty Connie so kind of you hugs

Connie Marcum Wong October 16, 2015 at 2:53 AM These are not easy to express without the lines seeming forced, but you did a splendid job on this beauty!

Nette Onclaud October 14, 2015 at 2:09 PM steamy write shadow.. well done!.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux October 14, 2015 at 10:01 AM This is a hot one Shadow!

Ravi Sathasivam October 14, 2015 at 6:55 AM Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Eve Roper October 13, 2015 at 8:50 PM I need a fan!!! Love the sensual write a7 .Hugs Eve

Jan Allison October 13, 2015 at 6:54 PM Wow Shadow this sure is a sensual poem:-) Love the impact of the repeated lines:-) hugs jan xx7 Shadow Hamilton October 13, 2015 at 7:37 PM ty Jan it was fun to write hugs