Carjacker’s Shoebox

That's a surprising shoebox - good one!

Dear Karen, I loved reading your poem this morning. The clipped lines match the mindset, tools, rules, and the kind of focus that comes from living outside the lines. I like how you let the poem end on motion rather than moral, the engine’s already turning over somewhere off-page. Blessings, Daniel

I like this a lot. An original idea very well expressed, Karen

You are making a serios bid to the 'poet laureate' of the 'jackers:' The carjackers, the hijackers, etc.

Very nice, Karen.

Ok you made me smile! :)

in Philly, we don't...i mean, they don't ") wear masks or glovez to car jack dear poet...unless you are referring to the creeps that vandalize whilst onez car iz park, unattended...yep, they be bold in Philly, thuh most uv them, thuh rest are too poor tuh buy masks and glovez...liked thuh write Karen...have a fantastic spring! much love

Creative poem. Well done. Good luck in. The contest :)

Wow! Very well said…phew!

Im loving the cadence in this dear karen. I love how you can turn anything around you into poetry! Now thats what real poets do! Like you! You write from your heart! I admire and appreciate that. Pleasure reading this today! Sending you light always

waw, so good poetry, thanks