Daniel Cwiak Poet Limerick

Caring

Our lives are one of constant care,


    As we are always running from here to there,


    Yet the care we show is no care at all,


    Except for ourselves since Adam's fall,


    And still He came, His death and life for us to share.

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Andrea Dietrich June 25, 2010 at 8:40 PM Congratulations in the winner circle, Daniel.

Carol Sunshine Brown June 25, 2010 at 11:24 AM Congratulations Daniel on your win in John Freeman's contest "Human Foible vs Godly Nature". Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor June 25, 2010 at 5:37 AM Congrats, Dan. Great write. You and yours have a great weekend. Rgds, Ralph

John Freeman June 24, 2010 at 11:02 PM Congratulations Daniel. A worthy presentation with this fine poem. As you say mostly the care we take is the care for ourselves. Let us regain our consciousness of life itself, for the care we are taking is not life at all, but strife. Agape, Moses

C.C Bloomsfield June 23, 2010 at 9:44 AM Great write for the contest!Celene!

Dr.Ram Mehta June 23, 2010 at 9:21 AM A wonderful entry in the contest. Good luck