Caricature

The silvery fog called to me
Come sit enjoy leisure
You've worked hard, its time for joy
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He was squat and fat funny man
Bald, round, loved cups of dram
He'd laugh and joke kid many folks
True feelings inside crammed 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Situation Avatar
September 23, 2012 at 3:56 PM
is it a misspelling?
Dietrich Avatar
September 23, 2012 at 1:43 PM
Is the second poem a caricature of the fog? It was sure cute. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
September 23, 2012 at 8:45 AM
interesting verses Sara .. humorous lines on a cool Sunday morning in Autumn .. our temps now in low 50's .. feels like snow already luv .. thankxx for warm wishes for new baby .. they r coming home later today.. how is Princess doing?
Horne Avatar
September 22, 2012 at 2:11 PM
lol, had a chuckle at this one, Sara : )
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September 22, 2012 at 7:15 AM
ck soup mail.
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September 22, 2012 at 7:07 AM
Hey Sara, I plan on putting together a Halloween book, which should be an interesting book, full of ghosts and ghouls and goblins! I'll let you know of this if you want to buy one...It'll have over 200 Halloween poems. That will be exciting!
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September 22, 2012 at 7:01 AM
I admire your creativity, Sara. I am glad I stopped by to read this awesome work. May be you would like to know that my collection of poems titled The Rainbow of Dreams was published in USA on July 25 this year by the Createspace of Amazon. The book contains all my poems written so far plus some translations of classical Urdu Poetry of Masters. You may look it up on internet on Amazon.com by the title and Author name Mohammad Yamin Iraqi. Best wishes. -Mohammad
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September 21, 2012 at 10:29 PM
I love your poetry!
Sivey Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 7:14 PM
This is quite the clever write my friend! I've really enjoyed reading this great write this evening! What an awesome poem Sara! Fantastic piece, Excellent Work!!
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